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User talk:Brerose/Characters
Couldn't you have given them a description? All you're listing is their powers. - nehnjaduehk 13:45, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah. I know it sounds stupid but I'm actually a tad interested in who these guys are THENOID 05:30, 21 December 2008 (UTC)
And could you add bios for more than like, 2 characters? Also, have you even used half these characters in any sort of stuff? - nehnjaduehk 22:33, 21 December 2008 (UTC)
You need to expand on these characters. Go into their personalities - is Raggonix nice or is he mean? Is Gale clam or angry etc. Maybe make up backstories too or something. EXPAND 206.159.155.148 15:59, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
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Hmm, not to be mean or anything, but these could use some work before getting accepted by me. Look over the character rules again. Here's some things you should do:
- Make a page for each of the characters you're using. Like, a seperate page. So you can fit more in.
- 'Add some personality! Your characters should act different from one another. So say what their traits are. Look at mine or noid's character pages for examples.
- Don't be evil. You're trying to fight of the evil that is Xagros, if you remember.
- Tone down your characters' abilities. They can't be too powerful; abilities like teleporting should not be given to your characters.
- Above all, write more about your characters. Most of the people have written around fifteen sentences or more about their character. So try writing more basically.
Shadow Scythe 16:53, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
robots don't have religions
And if you're gonna make them all have religions don't make them creepy-crazy like "Mexican Islam" or something, rastafarian is a much better choice 206.159.155.148 17:06, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
- yeah i mean people who practice voodoo are usually Caribbean and stuff - SKUB ? 20:02, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
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Having too much characters can be a bad thing. Lucian Summers 12:16, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
- ahem - SKUB ? 15:56, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
EXPANSION IS NECESSARY FOR FULL UNDERSTANDING
characters don't grow up if you don't make them They call me Big T BLOOD 02:20, 6 July 2010 (UTC)