Talk:Absolutely Nothing/I

Okay it was all normal until I read something about dimensions and then I thought I was dreaming or something. You're a good writer, I'll tell you that--but try not to make comparisons between your characters and characters from established media. Doing that makes your characters seem derivative sometimes. - SKUB ? 15:45, 22 December 2009 (UTC)

I wasn't even attempting to link up the characters in the first place, but it's hard to describe the appearence without using illustrations. The gigantic infodump is deliberate, because Monochrome (as a character) is basically the personification of a narrator and often dwells too much on things like that, and usually has to be woken into reality by another character. I admit I may have made it way too long, but this won't show up as much in the future. I also admit this chapter was rather thrown together, but it was my attempt to ground the characters' personalities and establish a setting. Further chapters will probably not be this clunky. Monochrome 15:58, 22 December 2009 (UTC)