User:Badstar/Mcrew

Okay, so heres the deal. I'm may make a text fiction. If I do, it'll probably be my last text fiction ever until I feel like I have an idea that needs to get made. I'm gonna let you decide. I'm going to give you all an example and you rate it and speak your true opinion. Before going on, I want to inform you that normal episodes won't be this short. This is just an example. This is just half of the first episode.

The Mansion Crew

{Everybody is on the couch watching TV. Cut to the TV. It shows everybody on the couch watching TV on the TV in there is everybody on the couch watching TV and so on.}

EDWARD: What the bloody hell? {Stares at camera}

BADSTAR: Just ignore it, man...

{Opening sequence. The show begins afterwards. The show opens on the roof. Kyubii is on top. Demyx is there too. Both of them are in a hanglider}

DEMYX: K-k-...Kyubii... I'M NOT SURE THIS IS A GOOD IDEA!!!

KYUBII: Nonsense my friend... Now lets ride!

{They both jump off of the roof.}

KYUBII: WHOOOOOOOOOO-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

DEMYX: {Simotameiusly} AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

{The hanglider starts going towards the ground. It eventually crashes into a tree next door. Demyx is on the ground, obviously injured.}

DEMYX: I'm okay...

KYUBII: This didn't go too well... now how the hell do I get down from here?

{Later that night...}

DEMYX: K-kyubii... will we ever get home?

KYUBII: God, don't be a pansie! We live right next door to this place for god's sake! Just calm down, wussy!

{A few seconds later...}

KYUBII: I CAN'T TAKE IT MAN!!! I. JUST. CAN'T. TAKE IT!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! DIE I TELL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DEMYX: {Simataneously.} AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BOTH: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

END OF SNEAK PEEK. NOW TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK.

WHAT DOES THOU THINK?

• fail -pmelondemon43y 22:26, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
• ...It's okay. Kinda funny. belstrnnmmvnmn 23:33, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
• fail Brerose 03:09, 23 September 2009 (UTC)