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Revision as of 16:38, 18 August 2013
This is acceptable, you have personality and backstory and abilities I guess. But I'm not sure who Hiccup is and I'm not sure why you're using an actual cat as a character to be honest. I recommend changing a bit. And perhaps writing more. But it'll do. So just say whether you want to flesh it out or if you think you're good to go.
