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| − | oh my god i love this so much {{User:Sephiroth/sig}} 23:13, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
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| − | :That is the plan, yes, although I have yet to brainstorm it. I mostly decided to start with an opener to test my Show:Tell ratio. After watching some Firefly episodes recently, I'm starting to get a bit more conscious about it, given I riff near anything anyway. Thing about the episodes I watched is sometimes those episodes would drag something out that was really minor and then go into mass detail about it later, or otherwise exposit on something else and then drop the subject matter in the next few episodes. Both these things are writing no-nos, so I figured I'd learn from my riffing and try to avoid becoming the padded strawberry eating scene in the pilot that has no bearing on plot or character development at all. [[User:Noxigar|Noxigar]] 23:30, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
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| − | :Strawberry eating scene? {{User:Sephiroth/sig}} 23:37, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
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| − | ::The Engineer (Kaylee?) eats a strawberry for much longer than is necessary, and the scene is played out so the eating looks sexy. In reality, it looks annoying. [[User:Noxigar|Noxigar]] 23:41, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
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| − | == something worth noting ==
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| − | Regarding the contrast between Rosenberg and D'Arque, what with Rosenberg having a city and D'Arque having a town.
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| − | D'Arque is technically in a better position, due to the fact that he actually has all the power in Towningdale while not actually being an official leader. Rosenberg, while being the official mayor of the city, holds almost no power whatsoever due to his reclusive nature, and with the exception of the wealthy area in which he resides, the rest of the city is really a crime invested pit. {{User:Sephiroth/sig}} 00:22, 22 December 2012 (UTC)
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| − | :I guess we could shed some light on that. [[User:Noxigar|Noxigar]] 01:20, 22 December 2012 (UTC)
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| − | == We should also use the room to keep track of plot points and their ensuing plot holes ==
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| − | So as to ensure we don't have any problems like we have the last two/three times we did this. {{User:Chaosvii7/Sig}} 04:11, 22 December 2012 (UTC)
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| − | :Alright. I'm trying to avoid those confounded plot holes, if I can. [[User:Noxigar|Noxigar]] 04:15, 22 December 2012 (UTC)
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| − | :Of course. But at this point, I don't believe we have any, do we? {{User:Sephiroth/sig}} 04:15, 22 December 2012 (UTC)
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