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Noxigar: I changed the name of a tree to be more unique

2019-06-28T06:14:12Z

I changed the name of a tree to be more unique

Noxigar at 17:53, 8 May 2019

2019-05-08T17:53:09Z

Noxigar: I presume Lex still has his own "Overhaul Jutsu" to do for this Episode to re-integrate a scene of D'Arque getting a selfie with Chaos. In the meantime, however... minor Grammar Jutsu here, too.

2019-05-08T17:52:45Z

I presume Lex still has his own "Overhaul Jutsu" to do for this Episode to re-integrate a scene of D'Arque getting a selfie with Chaos. In the meantime, however... minor Grammar Jutsu here, too.

Noxigar at 19:15, 21 November 2018

2018-11-21T19:15:06Z

Noxigar at 19:14, 21 November 2018

2018-11-21T19:14:28Z

Noxigar at 19:13, 21 November 2018

2018-11-21T19:13:48Z

Noxigar at 02:14, 20 November 2018

2018-11-20T02:14:27Z

Noxigar at 02:10, 20 November 2018

2018-11-20T02:10:05Z

Noxigar at 02:07, 20 November 2018

2018-11-20T02:07:41Z

Noxigar at 22:52, 18 November 2018

2018-11-18T22:52:24Z

@@ Line 620: / Line 620: @@
 '''LEX:''' Garfield found a tree here, and he's called it a name I've forgotten.
-'''GARFIELD:''' I called it "Tauradonna." I considered other names, but "Tauradonna" stuck out as being the best one.
+'''GARFIELD:''' I called it "Taulragothna." I considered other names, but "Taulragothna" stuck out as being the best one.
 ''{Lex, Volkov, and Stephanie look around the area, while Garfield motions towards the glowing green tree. He sits down near it, closing his eyes. After a few seconds, Garfield himself begins glowing green. He looks to be fully restored to "normal," though the glow eventually wears off. He gets up, and walks back towards the other three. As Garfield approaches the group, Lex's phone begins to ring.}''

@@ Line 3: / Line 3: @@
 * Chaos pays the utility bill, giving Town Hall a promised "beating off."
 * Noelle, Mayor Meier, and Dahn are each introduced.
 * Lex and Garfield attempt a LARP, but are interrupted by a story.
 * Spook Cliff is briefly revisited.

@@ Line 203: / Line 203: @@
 ''{Chaos opens the door, leaves, and then slams it behind him. Cut to Garfield and Lex, who gaze blankly at the door, wondering what just happened.}''
-'''GARFIELD:''' Where did you find this guy?
+'''GARFIELD:''' Where did you find him?
-'''LEX:''' Oh, we go back, mon. I gave him a lift in my camper van after he dropped out of magic school-
+'''LEX:''' Oh, we go back a long way, mon. I gave him a lift in my camper van after he dropped out of magic school-
 ''{Garfield blinks.}''
@@ Line 211: / Line 211: @@
 '''GARFIELD:''' Did you say "dropped out of magic school?"
-'''LEX:''' Ya, mon.
+''{Lex looks at Garfield, in confusion.}''
-''{Garfield ponders for a moment.}''
+'''LEX:''' Uh... ya, mon.
 '''GARFIELD:''' Is this a strange coincidence, or is Chaos like looking at a parallel version of myself...?
@@ Line 227: / Line 229: @@
 '''LEX:''' Nay. It was his idea of a "fun time."
-''{Garfield frowns.}''
+''{Garfield's expression becomes more crestfallen.}''
 '''GARFIELD:''' Let us hope that he doesn't try projecting his idea of "fun" at us any time soon...
@@ Line 281: / Line 283: @@
 ''{Chaos looks at the receptionist and furrows his brow, in an attempt to look sexy. He clears his throat and leans on a nearby pillar.}''
-'''CHAOS:''' I don't suppose you could give me... an exception?
+'''CHAOS:''' I don't suppose you could give me an exception?
 ''{The receptionist looks Chaos up and down.}''
-'''RECEPTIONIST:''' I can make a special exception for you.
+'''RECEPTIONIST:''' I can make a ''special'' exception for you.
 ''{The two lock eyes, as Chaos and the receptionist walk towards each other in a sensual manner. They also stare deeply at each other, leaning closer to fill the space between them. Romantic music begins to play, as Chaos puts his arms around her waist and the two are about to kiss. Suddenly, the music stops. The last few moments are revealed to be part of Chaos' imagination, as he is standing flushed after she asked him if she had an appointment.}''
@@ Line 307: / Line 309: @@
 '''CHAOS:''' Thank you...
-''{Chaos walks towards the receptionist to read her nametag: "Noelle."}''
+''{Short pause. Chaos walks towards the receptionist to read her nametag: "Noelle."}''
 '''CHAOS:''' ...Noelle.

@@ Line 161: / Line 161: @@
 ''{Chaos begins rifling through his pocket, then goes over to the kitchen counter. He gets out his wallet, and begins to check the contents of it.}''
-'''CHAOS:''' I have about $20 in my wallet. Do you think that’ll be enough to cover it?
+'''CHAOS:''' I have about $20.00 in my wallet. Do you think that’ll be enough to cover it?
 ''{Garfield rolls his eyes.}''

@@ Line 637: / Line 637: @@
 ''{Chaos gives a dismissive expression.}''
-'''CHAOS:''' That's irrelevant, though. Say, do either of you have a spare $20? I still need to pay the utility bills!
+'''CHAOS:''' That's irrelevant, though. Say, do either of you have a spare $20.00? I still need to pay the utility bills!
 '''LEX:''' Don't ya worry about that, mon. We talked to the receptionist at Town Hall-

@@ Line 667: / Line 667: @@
 '''LEX:''' We're in the clear now, brudda!
-'''CHAOS:''' But the Mayor said we owed $20...
+'''CHAOS:''' But the Mayor said we owed $20.00...
 '''GARFIELD:''' We're good. He must've been mistaken.

@@ Line 93: / Line 93: @@
 and then Chaos is gonna be grilling!<br/>
-''{Lex takes a pause momentarily with his food to put his head up and focus his attention on Chaos. Garfield gets up from his seat and moves off-screen after finishing his drink.}''
+''{Lex takes a pause momentarily with his food, to put his head up and focus his attention on Chaos. Garfield gets up from his seat, and moves off-screen after finishing his drink.}''
 '''LEX:''' Are you singing, mon? While makin' chicken for breakfast?

@@ Line 92: / Line 92: @@
 Marinate it with sauces<br/>
 and then Chaos is gonna be grilling!<br/>
-−
-''{Garfield gets up from his seat, moving offscreen after finishing his drink. After a few seconds, he returns while holding a copy of the newspaper, sits down, and begins reading from it.}''
+''{Lex takes a pause momentarily with his food to put his head up and focus his attention on Chaos. Garfield gets up from his seat and moves off-screen after finishing his drink.}''
 '''GARFIELD:''' Say, did you guys hear about the old theatre from across the road? It’s apparently scheduled for a re-opening.

@@ Line 86: / Line 86: @@
 '''LEIGH:''' I was going to have some awesome inner monologue about how I'm finally going places, but I really ''do'' need to find a better apartment, because this just isn't suitable at all.
-''{Cut to Lex/Garfield/Chaos, in their apartment having breakfast. Lex is guzzling down his cereal like there is no tomorrow. Garfield is drinking a glass of Naminade, which is glowing a suspicious blue. Chaos is in the kitchen, preparing chicken. Garfield gets up from his seat, moving offscreen after finishing his drink. After a few seconds, he returns while holding a copy of the newspaper, sits down, and begins reading from it.}''
+''{Cut to Lex/Garfield/Chaos, in their apartment having breakfast. Lex is guzzling down his cereal like there is no tomorrow. Garfield is drinking a glass of Naminade, which is glowing a suspicious blue. Chaos is in the kitchen, preparing chicken while singing to himself; to the tune of "Ignition Remix" by R. Kelly.}''
 '''GARFIELD:''' Say, did you guys hear about the old theatre from across the road? It’s apparently scheduled for a re-opening.

@@ Line 536: / Line 536: @@
 '''NOELLE:''' Did everything go alright?
-''{[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkXHsK4AQPs "Paranoid" by Black Sabbath] plays as Chaos rushes down the Townindale streets, desperately trying to figure out his next move. He scans his surroundings, looking for the beggar that he gave money to. As he sprints, he scans the buildings he is running past. He passes by a rental store and an apothecary’s before finding a bank within a different sector of Downtownindale. Chaos skids to a halt, and darts to the entrance. He kicks the doors, swinging them open.}''
+''{[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkXHsK4AQPs "Paranoid" by Black Sabbath] plays as Chaos rushes down the Townindale streets, desperately trying to figure out his next move. He scans his surroundings, looking for the beggar that he gave money to. As he sprints, he scans the buildings he is running past. He passes by a rental store and an apothecary’s store, before finding a bank within a different sector of Downtownindale. Chaos skids to a halt, and darts to the entrance. He kicks the doors, swinging them open.}''
 '''TELLER:''' Hello, may we help-