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 '''GARFIELD:''' I'll have you know this stuff is ''not'' poisonous!
-'''GOD COMPLEX:''' ''{flatly}'' That is not enough.
+'''GOD COMPLEX:''' ''{flatly}'' That is insufficient reasoning to not have prepared better.
 '''BRUCE:''' You look wasted. Let's take you to your home, Garfield! You at least deserve some pizza...

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 '''GARFIELD:''' Hold on, I can do this... Just give me a second!
-''{Garfield pours some colored vials of liquid into a machine while he types on the computer. After a couple of seconds, the machine makes a "ding" sound, and it pours out a glowing green liquid into a cup. Garfield transfers the green liquid into an aerosol spray and puts goggles on. He strolls over to a scene of a plant in the middle of devouring a scientist and sprays it with the formula. The plant freezes and spits the scientist out, who emerges alive and well. He sprays the formula all around the laboratory, prompting the plants to cease their attacks on the scientists and become docile. He then gently leads the plants back into their cages and goes back to his computer. Cut back to Chaos and Lex.}''
+''{Garfield pours some colored vials of liquid into a machine while he types on the computer. After a couple of seconds, the machine makes a "ding" sound. It pours out a glowing green liquid, into a cup. Garfield transfers the green liquid into an aerosol spray, and puts goggles on. He strolls over to a scene of a plant in the middle of devouring a scientist, and sprays it with the formula. The plant freezes and spits the scientist out, who emerges alive and well. Garfield sprays the formula all around the laboratory, prompting the plants to cease their attacks on the scientists, and become docile. He then gently leads the plants back into their cages; then, he goes back to his computer, once the dust has finally settled. Cut back to Chaos and Lex.}''
 '''CHAOS:''' On second thought, why'd I even bother to ask?

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 ''{Leigh shuffles over to an old-looking stereo on his dresser. Examining the stereo, he presses the radio button. The radio announcer sounds exactly like someone doing a Jim Carrey impression.}''
-'''RADIO ANNOUNCER:''' AAAAAAAAALRIGHTY THEN. I AM TIM ZARREY AND YOU ARE LISTENING TO HOLLYWOOD RADIO, THE ONLY STATION WHERE THE STARS PLAY THE HITS! We're gonna start this morning off with a 90's classic. We got ourselves some Briiiiiiiiitney Spears! And folks? Y'all have a good morning now, and in case I don't see ya, good afternoon, good evening, and goooooooooooooooood niiiiiiiight!
+'''RADIO ANNOUNCER:''' AAAAAAAAALRIGHTY THEN. I AM TIM ZARREY AND YOU ARE LISTENING TO HOLLYWOOD RADIO, THE ONLY STATION WHERE THE STARS PLAY THE HITS! We're gonna start this morning off with a 90's classic. We got ourselves some Briiiiiiiiitney Spears! And folks? Y'all have a good morning now, and, in case I don't see ya... good afternoon, good evening, and goooooooooooooooood niiiiiiiight!
 ''{Leigh strikes a pose as the first few notes of [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91Niv2q4gvc ...Baby One More Time] begin to play. He swags over to his bathroom. Cut to his top half in the shower, where he's mouthing along to the lyrics with his eyes closed, grooving hard to the song. Pan out to an above shot of the wigmaker's shop. The camera moves, to pan to the front room of Chaos, Lex, and Garfield's apartment. Lex has just appeared on-screen, wearing a tie with a picture of Bruce Willis, Morgan Freeman, and John Malkovich on it. Chaos is sitting on the couch in his pajamas, watching the morning news and eating from a tub of ice cream. Garfield is nowhere to be seen. From the couch, Chaos turns to Lex, shooting him a look of confusion.}''

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 ==Transcript==
-''{Open to Leigh's apartment at 6:00AM. His alarm clock begins to buzz. Leigh wakes up, looking groggy and squinting. He looks at the alarm, and peels the bedsheets off. He sits at the edge of the bed and looks at his phone. Cut to a shot of his phone, showing several new texts from Jules. One of them reads "awesum night, fam!", accompanied by a selfie of the two, looking obviously drunk and grinning widely. Leigh chuckles at the picture.}''
+''{Open to Leigh's apartment at 6:00 AM. His alarm clock begins to buzz. Leigh wakes up, looking groggy and squinting. He looks at the alarm, and peels the bedsheets off. He sits at the edge of the bed and looks at his phone. Cut to a shot of his phone, showing several new texts from Jules. One of them reads "awesum night, fam!", accompanied by a selfie of the two, looking obviously drunk and grinning widely. Leigh chuckles at the picture.}''
 '''LEIGH:''' Look at that. I made a new friend and got a new job.

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 '''LEIGH:''' Um, go sports team?
-''{The sports game turns on. Then, it cuts to the facial expressions of the three characters - Jules and Gordon look excited, while Leigh looks mildly amused. Cut to Leigh's apartment on the next day, at 6:00AM. His alarm clock begins to buzz. Leigh wakes up, looking even groggier than before. He looks at the alarm, and peels the bedsheets off. He sits at the edge of the bed and looks at his phone. Cut to a shot of his phone, showing several new texts from Jules and Gordon. One of them reads "Ach, that was fuckin mental! Leigh, ya mad lad!", accompanied by a selfie of the three, looking obviously drunk and grinning widely.}''
+''{The sports game turns on. Then, it cuts to the facial expressions of the three characters - Jules and Gordon look excited, while Leigh looks mildly amused. Cut to Leigh's apartment on the next day, at 6:00 AM. His alarm clock begins to buzz. Leigh wakes up, looking even groggier than before. He looks at the alarm, and peels the bedsheets off. He sits at the edge of the bed and looks at his phone. Cut to a shot of his phone, showing several new texts from Jules and Gordon. One of them reads "Ach, that was fuckin mental! Leigh, ya mad lad!", accompanied by a selfie of the three, looking obviously drunk and grinning widely.}''
 '''LEIGH:''' Second day on the job and I made a second friend. I am okay with this.

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 '''ELDERLY GENTLEMAN:''' Any time, lad.
-''{Chaos and the Elderly Gentleman both walk away in the opposite direction. The Elderly Gentleman smirks as he walks offscreen. Cut to the apartment. Chaos enters to see Garfield back home and hand-crafting a plush of a purple heart at the dinner table. Next to Garfield is a box of pizza with his name on it, the letters being from the Russian alphabet.}''
+''{Chaos and the Elderly Gentleman both walk away in the opposite direction. The Elderly Gentleman smirks as he walks offscreen. Cut to Chaos' apartment, with the darker window outside indicating a time gap having passed by, since the previous scene. Chaos enters, to see Garfield back home. He looks dazily occupied, with hand-crafting a plush of a purple heart at the dinner table. Next to Garfield is a box of pizza with his name on it, with the inked letters from the Russian alphabet. Chaos examines his surroundings, before shooting a glance at Garfield.}''
 '''CHAOS:''' I don't suppose you enjoy skiing, do you?

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 '''GARFIELD:''' That... doesn't sound like a particularly appetizing meal...
-''{Chaos lets out a pathetic whale-like cry, as he puts a pillow ontop of his head. Suddenly Lex bursts into the living room.}''
+''{Chaos lets out a pathetic whale-like cry, as he puts a pillow on top of his head. Suddenly Lex bursts into the living room.}''
 '''LEX:''' HEY, HONEEEEYYYYS, I'M HO-OOOOOOOME!

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 ''{Garfield raises a finger.}''
-'''GARFIELD:''' I'll have you know this stuff is ''not'' poisonous-
+'''GARFIELD:''' I'll have you know this stuff is ''not'' poisonous!
 '''GOD COMPLEX:''' ''{flatly}'' That is not enough.

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 '''GARFIELD:''' I wonder how Lex is doing...
-''{Cut to the Mattress Warehouse. Lex is sitting alone at a cashier booth near the entrance of the shop. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oqLpko9Gprs "Human Nature" by Michael Jackson] is echoing through the intercom, and he is humming along to it. Zoom out to reveal that the shop is absolutely massive and practically empty, save for several mattress displays. Lex is the only person in this gigantic building. Zoom out even further to reveal that the store is sitting in a part of the Industrial District that borders with Spook Cliff.
+''{Cut to the Mattress Warehouse. Lex is sitting alone at a cashier booth near the entrance of the shop. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oqLpko9Gprs "Human Nature" by Michael Jackson] is echoing through the intercom, and he is humming along to it. Zoom out to reveal that the shop is absolutely massive and practically empty, save for several mattress displays. Lex is the only person in this gigantic building. Zoom out even further to reveal that the store is sitting in a part of the Industrial District that borders with Spook Cliff. Cut back to Bruce and God Complex, as they study Garfield.}''
-''{Cut to Leigh, who has been flanked as Jules and Gordon appear on his sides, both wearing sunglasses.}''
+'''GOD COMPLEX:''' ''{flatly}'' It appears you ingested your own aerosol spray.
 '''LEIGH:''' Oh, Jules! What are you doi-

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 ''{Leigh types on the keyboard a few times and clicks the mouse.}''
-'''STEPHANIE:''' Well, he's about to. We need an endorsement from Rosenberg herself, first.
+'''STEPHANIE:''' Well, he's ''about'' to. We need an endorsement from Rosenberg herself, first.
 '''LEIGH:''' An endorsement? Oh my, I um, you might need to ask her directly.
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 '''GARFIELD:''' I wonder how Lex is doing...
-''{Cut to the Mattress Warehouse. Lex is sitting alone at a cashier booth near the entrance of the shop. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oqLpko9Gprs "Human Nature" by Michael Jackson] is echoing through the intercom, and he is humming along to it. Zoom out to reveal that the shop is absolutely massive and practically empty, save for several mattress displays. Lex is the only person in this gigantic building. Zoom out even further to reveal that the store is sitting in a part of the Industrial District that borders with Spook Cliff. Cut to Leigh, who has been flanked as Jules and Gordon appear on his sides, both wearing sunglasses.}''
+''{Cut to the Mattress Warehouse. Lex is sitting alone at a cashier booth near the entrance of the shop. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oqLpko9Gprs "Human Nature" by Michael Jackson] is echoing through the intercom, and he is humming along to it. Zoom out to reveal that the shop is absolutely massive and practically empty, save for several mattress displays. Lex is the only person in this gigantic building. Zoom out even further to reveal that the store is sitting in a part of the Industrial District that borders with Spook Cliff.
 '''LEIGH:''' Oh, Jules! What are you doi-
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 ''{Jules looks at Gordon, skeptically.}''
-'''JULES:''' We need to ''initiate'' our friend here.
+'''JULES:''' We need to ''initiate'' our friend here, on how we do things in Rosenberg Industries After Dark.
 '''LEIGH:''' Wait, I never agreed to-