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Noxigar: Lex concurred something else here. Easy correction, at least.

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Lex concurred something else here. Easy correction, at least.

Noxigar: For once, Briar and I were in agreement about something not making sense.

2018-11-18T02:57:46Z

For once, Briar and I were in agreement about something not making sense.

Noxigar at 00:31, 13 November 2018

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Noxigar at 22:57, 12 November 2018

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Noxigar at 22:45, 12 November 2018

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Noxigar at 21:53, 12 November 2018

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Noxigar at 19:03, 12 November 2018

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Noxigar at 04:46, 9 November 2018

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Noxigar at 01:08, 6 November 2018

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Noxigar at 23:56, 5 November 2018

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 '''STEPHANIE:''' I see...
-''{Fast-forward to the end of the luncheon, just an hour later. Stephanie and Garfield each had an array of different entrees, which are spread throughout the table. A familiar female Orc waitress - nametag reading "Agrob" - has just returned.}''
+''{Fast-forward to the end of the luncheon, just an hour later. Stephanie and Garfield each had an array of different entrees, which are spread throughout the table. A female Orc waitress has just returned.}''
-'''AGROB:''' Are you guys ready for the check?
+'''FEMALE ORC WAITRESS:''' Are you guys ready for the check?
 ''{Garfield nods, and offers a hand. The waitress plants the check on him, and departs. Stephanie's eyes move to look at her.}''

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 '''GARFIELD:''' Why, thank you!
-''{Lex rolls his eyes, initially skeptical of Garfield's taste. However, he gives it a visibly pensive thought.}''
+''{Lex rolls his eyes, initially skeptical of Garfield's taste. However, he gives it a visibly pensive thought. After a while, Lex just shrugs and moves on, as if unsure how to adequately respond.}''
 '''GARFIELD:''' For now, I must bid you adieu.

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 '''GUS:''' Maybe you'll enjoy that better, then!
-''{Gus goes over to make another drink for Garfield, who tries it and sighs with relief. He notices a karaoke bar across the way.}''
+''{Gus goes over to make another drink for Garfield, who tries it and sighs with relief. He notices a high-quality karaoke machine across the way.}''
 '''GARFIELD:''' Is that...? I didn't know you guys had a karaoke machine!

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 '''GARFIELD:''' Time to get serious.
-''{Garfield and Rosemary attempt to strike at each other - one with katana, the other with fists. Rosemary's swipes and stabs narrowly miss Garfield, but do cause partial damage to his coat and cut his hair into an odd shape. On the other end of combat - Garfield's fists either do not connect to Rosemary at all, or are otherwise parried by her katana. After a while, Rosemary tries to do a katana technique, but Garfield blocks it with the ruined wig. The katana gets tangled in the wig, much to her annoyance.}''
+''{Garfield and Rosemary attempt to strike at each other - one with katana, the other with fists. Rosemary's swipes and stabs narrowly miss Garfield, but do cause partial damage to his coat and cut his hair into an odd shape. On the other end of combat - Garfield's fists either do not connect to Rosemary at all, or are otherwise parried by her katana. After a while, Rosemary tries to do a katana technique, but Garfield blocks it with the ruined wig. The katana gets tangled in it, much to her annoyance.}''
 '''ROSEMARY:''' Not only have you ruined my bike, you've ruined my blade!
-''{Rosemary scrambles to get the katana out of his wig, while Garfield takes the time to run back into the alleyways of the part of Towningdale he finds himself in. He scans the area, finding a wig shoppe. He then enters it, and is greeted by the salesperson, who is an old man with luscious brown locks.}''
+''{Rosemary scrambles to get the katana out of his wig, while Garfield takes the time to put his hood back on, and run back into the alleyways of the part of Towningdale he now finds himself in. He scans the area, finding a wig shoppe. He then enters it, and is greeted by the salesperson, who is an old man with luscious brown locks.}''
 '''SALESPERSON:''' Oh, greetings! It's not often I-

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 '''GARFIELD:''' You Yankee Archmage-wannabes never learn.
-''{Garfield throws the other motorcycle tire at Rosemary, hitting her in the head. Once both motorcycle tires are on the ground, he snaps, in an attempt to levitate them. He succeeds in getting them to orbit around Rosemary for a little bit, then he gives a thumbs-up sign as the tires explode, causing the water to erupt wildly. Once the water subsides, Rosemary is nowhere to be seen. Garfield looks around, wondering if she is nearby; when he does not find her, he blinks.}''
+''{Garfield throws the other motorcycle tire at Rosemary, hitting her in the head. Once both motorcycle tires are on the ground, he snaps, in an attempt to levitate them. He succeeds in getting them to orbit around Rosemary for a little bit, but then they drop to the ground.}''
-'''GARFIELD:''' ...was that Rosemary Touchdown? I recognize that as being her, if I remember my Bounty Hunters right. I guess I can...
+'''GARFIELD:''' Oh, come the ''fuck'' on. Why do these spells always play out better in my head?!
-''{Garfield takes out gold sunglasses from his pocket. As his eyes stop glowing red, he puts the sunglasses over them.}''
+''{Rosemary gets up, clutching her chest.}''
-'''GARFIELD:''' ...cross her name off my Shitlist.
+'''GARFIELD:''' ...oh, I recognize you now!
-''{Short pause, as crickets chirp. Garfield shrugs, then takes off the blonde wig. Given its dismal state, he throws it away in a nearby wastebasket. He moseys on over to dry land, finding himself in a completely different part of Towningdale than the one he was previously in. He spies a wig shoppe, off in the distance, and heads towards it. He then enters the wig shoppe, and is greeted by the salesperson, who is an old man with luscious brown locks.}''
+''{She lifts a finger, as if to say something. She stops herself.}''
 '''SALESPERSON:''' Oh, greetings! It's not often I-

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 ''{The images rotate some more, until a version of Garfield with the caption "Age: 18" on it is in the center.}''
-'''GARFIELD:''' ''{offscreen}'' I thought having a Nobel Peace Prize, for curing Ciwic, would make me look impressive.
+'''GARFIELD:''' ''{offscreen}'' I thought having a Nobel Peace Prize, for curing Kiwic, would make me look impressive.
-'''TRACY:''' ''{offscreen}'' Ciwic ''was'' a nasty genophage that nearly wiped out many Humanoid Races.
+'''TRACY:''' ''{offscreen}'' Kiwic ''was'' a nasty genophage that nearly wiped out many Humanoid Races.
 '''GARFIELD:''' ''{offscreen}'' But alas...
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 '''GARFIELD:''' Wait, how the hell did-
-''{Flashback to Garfield, outside, with a caption reading, "Just Last Week." He notices several "gangster"-looking individuals mocking Tracy openly, with other staff not doing anything. Upon seeing Tracy get beat up by the people mocking him, Garfield's eyes glow red. He promptly heads toward an equally red motorcycle, violently plucks the tires off of it, and then proceeds to enter Surreal Cereals.}''
+''{Garfield stares, blank-faced, at the motorcycle tires. Police sirens wake Garfield out of his "flashback." Garfield checks the ice cream truck's mirrors, as he witnesses that police are chasing both him and Rosemary. A lightbulb appears over Garfield's head. He then puts his hood back on, and arms himself with the motorcycle tires. He once again peers outside the window, and sees multiple biker gangs chasing after the police, who are still chasing Rosemary and - by extension - him. His head leans back, as if showing signs of panic.}''
 '''GARFIELD:''' Well, '''''that escalated quickly.'''''

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 '''GARFIELD:''' I should probably find my way back to Downtowningdale. From there, I think I can make it back home to Little Moscow...
-'''FRANK:''' I hope you stop on by again soon, Mr. Bellinski!
+'''FRANK:''' I hope you stop on by again soon, Mister Bellinski!
 ''{Frank and Garfield pleasantly wave each other goodbye. Garfield exits the wig shop, and puts his hood back on. He tries to find a nearby trolley.}''

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 '''STEPHANIE:''' My lunch break ends soon. I admit, I lament not spending more time in general with you. Maybe we can do this again some time?
-''{Garfield nods and gives her a thumbs-up. Stephanie embraces Garfield, patting him on the back. This signals where they part ways; Garfield motions over to Lex's ice cream truck, with Stephanie walking offscreen to parts unknown. He gets inside, and starts the truck. He drives out of The Underground Market, heading through some intersections into Downtown. He eventually parks near Surreal Cereals, gets out the Point Card, then gets out of the truck and steps inside the establishment. Tracy notices the door open, and greets Garfield. Zoom out to reveal they are currently the only two people inside.}''
+''{Garfield nods and gives her a thumbs-up. Stephanie embraces Garfield, patting him on the back. This signals where they part ways; Garfield motions over to Lex's ice cream truck, with Stephanie walking offscreen to parts unknown. He gets inside, and starts the truck. He drives out of The Underground Market, heading through some intersections into Downtowningdale. He eventually parks near Surreal Cereals, gets out the Point Card, then gets out of the truck and steps inside the establishment. Tracy notices the door open, and greets Garfield. Zoom out to reveal they are currently the only two people inside.}''
 '''TRACY:''' Noxigar, you son of a shit! I didn't think I'd see you 'round, ever.

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 '''GARFIELD:''' Yep!
-'''STEPHANIE:''' Good to see that you've been able to work something out with him.
+'''STEPHANIE:''' Good to see that you've been able to work something out with her.
 '''GARFIELD:''' It's enabled me to do a teensy bit more to spruce up our apartment. I heard we had a new guest, this Edgymancer who keeps calling himself "Chaos" for some undisclosed reason.