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Noxigar at 18:05, 8 May 2019

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Noxigar at 18:02, 8 May 2019

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Noxigar: Grammar Jutsu is all this needs, really

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Grammar Jutsu is all this needs, really

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Remolay at 06:17, 2 November 2018

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Noxigar at 14:53, 29 October 2018

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Tyrannosaurus Lex at 03:53, 9 June 2018

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Noxigar at 02:11, 9 June 2018

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Noxigar: I forgot I'm not a drag racer :V

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I forgot I'm not a drag racer :V

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 *The DuTempi mafia canvasses the entirety of Townindale to search for Lex & Chaos.
 *The mobsters catch wise to Chaos' presence, and catch using a swarm of cockroaches.
 *Noelle tries alerting authorities, but cellphone reception is jammed.
 *Noelle is picked up by Lex in the ice cream truck.

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	== Summary ==		== Summary ==
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		+	*Noelle is introduced through small snippets of her "everyday" life.
		+	*Despite the objections of his friends, Chaos decides to follow through with going out with Noelle for apartment hunting.
		+	*The DuTempi mafia canvasses the entirety of Townindale to search for Lex & Chaos.
		+	*The mobsters catch wise to Chaos' presence, and catch using a swarm of cockroaches.
		+	*Noelle tries alerting authorities, but cellphone reception is jammed.
		+	*Noelle is picked up by Lex in the ice cream truck.
		+	*Both Lex & Noelle fend off some of the DuTempi mafia while on the road.

	== Transcript ==		== Transcript ==

@@ Line 225: / Line 225: @@
 ''{Stephanie does a backflip off the bench, landing on the grass.}''
-'''STEPHANIE:''' I've been up since 3 AM trying to evade anxiety problems.
+'''STEPHANIE:''' I've been up since 3:00 AM trying to evade anxiety problems.
 ''{Short pause.}''
@@ Line 277: / Line 277: @@
 '''LEIGH:''' Yeah. Turns out that my life is still going pretty well since your boss got me fired.
-'''STEPHANIE:''' I'm sorry about that, I-...
+'''STEPHANIE:''' I'm sorry about that, I...
 '''LEIGH:''' I'm not blaming you. Though don't get me wrong, your boss is doing a good job at making enemies.
@@ Line 471: / Line 471: @@
 '''ROSATO:''' Me and the guys need a pick-me-up. A couple dozen ice-creams, would'ja?
-'''LEX:''' I don't have no ice-cream, mon. I'm, uh-... fresh out.
+'''LEX:''' I don't have no ice-cream, mon. I'm, uh... fresh out.
 ''{Guiliano appears next to Rosato.}''
@@ Line 501: / Line 501: @@
 ''{Chaos walks through the bathroom door. As he looks around in the bathroom, he notices the tap of the sink is shaking.}''
-'''CHAOS:''' Wha-...?
+'''CHAOS:''' Wha-?
 ''{Chaos turns the faucet, and suddenly a massive rush of cockroaches pour out of the tap. The sight of the roaches causes Chaos to turn blue. Cut back to Lex and the mobsters. Lex is visibly exhausted.}''
@@ Line 625: / Line 625: @@
 ''{Noelle steps forward to look around. Giuliano steps in front of her.}''
-'''GIULIANO:''' It was-.. uh.. the personal assistant. Yes! Ashur! Play us a song!
+'''GIULIANO:''' It was... uh... the personal assistant. Yes! Ashur! Play us a song!
 '''ROSATO:''' ''{muffled}'' Now playing.. uh..
@@ Line 673: / Line 673: @@
 ''{More static sounds. The line drops. Noelle looks at her phone and sees a low signal.}''
-'''NOELLE:''' Note to self, change my cell provider.
+'''NOELLE:''' Note to self: change my cell provider.
 ''{Cut to the exterior of the apartment, as Noelle runs out of the front doors. Lex parks in front of her with the ice-cream truck.}''

@@ Line 48: / Line 48: @@
 '''NED:''' I heard about what happened yesterday. You seemed to do quite a good job at committing assault. You could become an underground fighter. They get lots of money.
-'''LEIGH:''' I'm a lover, not a fighter! Plus, I can only do that under duress.
+'''LEIGH:''' That's not funny. You know I hate fighting.
 '''NED:''' Look, man. You just need to find your guardian angel. Everybody has one. Mine lets me be a lawyer while fulfilling my DDR addiction. Ooh, I know! How about I get a DDR machine installed in your apartment?
-'''LEIGH:''' Ned, I can barely pay for groceries. Plus, I am going to get evicted. A DDR machine is the last of my worries right now.
+'''LEIGH:''' Ned, I can barely pay for groceries. Plus, I'm pretty sure I'm going to be evicted. A DDR machine is the last of my worries right now.
-'''NED:''' That's a shame. I understand, though. I'll ask around and see if I can get you another job.
+''{Leigh leans back and sighs}''
-'''LEIGH:''' ...No. I can't. One of the things Maddie told me before she left me is that I rely on others too much. I came here for a fresh start, and I'm still doing it. I will fix this, no matter how badly life keeps throwing curveballs. I can do this!
+'''LEIGH:''' I haven't told her yet... She probably already knows. Why do I keep ending up on the evening news?
 '''NED:''' That's the spirit! You go out there, and you make something of yourself!

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 ''{Pan to the other side of the road. Garfield is watching Leigh through a pair of binoculars.}''
-'''GARFIELD:''' There he is. I will make his life better, even if it kills me. But, I can't let him see me. '''''Bewilder.'''''
+'''GARFIELD:''' There he is. I will make his life better, even if it kills me. But, I can't let him see me...
 ''{Garfield assumes a sneaking position as he awkwardly walks around people on the street. He carries on looking at Leigh while following him from the other side of the road. He watches Leigh as he walks into a record shop. He scurries across the road and looks through the window. Leigh walks up to the counter and hands the cashier his resume before walking out. As Leigh is walking out, the cashier can clearly be seen putting the resume into the trash. As Leigh walks out of the store with a smile on his face, Garfield hides behind a road sign, looking completely conspicuous. Leigh does not notice. Leigh carries on walking down the street. Garfield follows him from a short distance before pulling his wallet out and throwing it over Leigh's head. Leigh looks bewildered as he picks the wallet up and looks around. In these few seconds, Garfield has somehow gotten on-top of the roof of a building and is looking down from above.}''
@@ Line 512: / Line 512: @@
 ''{Leigh gives Garfield his wallet back.}''
-'''GARFIELD:''' I am severely regretting my part in the robbery.
+'''JULES:''' Shit dude, you did that thing? Oh man, my Aunt is gonna be fuckin' pissed at you.
-'''JULES:''' Shit dude, you did that thing? Oh man, my aunt is fuckin' pissed at you.
+'''GARFIELD:''' ''You heard everything.''
-'''GARFIELD:''' You heard everything.
+'''JULES:''' Nahhhhhhhh, don't worry about me, fam. I don't give a shit.  We cool. But MAN. You are in such deep shit, WOW.
 '''LEIGH:''' You're not making matters any better by telling him that!
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 '''JULES:''' Shit. Sorry. So... I figure Lex and Chaos were the other two guys?
-'''GARFIELD:''' Yes. As far as I'm aware, the two are at Lex's place of work. Ughhh.
+'''GARFIELD:''' Yes. As far as I'm aware, the two are at Lex's place of work.
 ''{Suddenly, Volkov can be heard yelling from downstairs.}''

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 ''{Garfield puts the Point Card back in his pocket.}''
-'''LEIGH:''' Why the covert bollocks? Why not just talk to me directly? I would've listened!
+'''LEIGH:''' Why not just talk to me directly? I would've listened!
-''{Garfield frowned.}''
+''{Garfield frowns.}''
 '''GARFIELD:''' I feared that you would attack me the same way that my friends were. I wanted to make amends for causing you to lose your job - I know that if anybody else was put under the same pressure-cooker that you were, that I would help them, too.
@@ Line 420: / Line 420: @@
 ''{Garfield looks outside a window. Leigh sighs.}''
-'''LEIGH:''' Well, if anything, count me in on your next big score against Xavier D'Arque.
+'''LEIGH:''' Well, if anything, count me in on your next big score against Xavier D'Arque. Thanks for the money, by the way. It'll definitely keep me from being evicted from my apartment.
 ''{Leigh goes for one of the glasses.}''
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 '''GARFIELD:''' Oh, no no no-
-'''STEPHANIE:''' Some people didn't take kindly to you winning all those auctions, and then someone else caught wind of your "streaks of luck" at a casino in San Crystal-balls. I also theorize he's targeting you because you saw a part of his true colours and he's got a Masquerade to uphold. Thank fuck I managed to get a good lunch break.
+'''STEPHANIE:''' Some people didn't take kindly to you winning all those auctions, and then someone else caught wind of your "streaks of luck" at a casino in San Crystal-balls. I also theorize he's targeting you because you saw a part of his true colours and he's got a Masquerade to uphold. Thank god I managed to get a good lunch break.
 ''{Garfield slams his own head against a table.}''
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 '''STEPHANIE:''' Oh, you guys just made my day. But, I gotta go. I just wanted to make a request to Garfield to keep himself from getting hurt. I will speak to you guys again, possibly after work.
-'''LEIGH:''' Bye.
+''{Garfield stops slamming his head.}''
 ''{Stephanie hangs up.}''
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 ''{Garfield nods.}''
-'''LEIGH:''' Julian?
+'''LEIGH:''' Jules?
 '''JULES:''' I heard everything.
-'''GARFIELD:''' I have yet to prepare my Coils of the Dragon today! How am I going to deal with a pro bounty Hunter on my ass?!
+'''GARFIELD:''' This is not good... this is not good at all. I have certain reason to believe that Lex and Chaos are in danger... and I now have a bounty hunter on my ass. Fuck, fuck, FUCK.
 ''{Jules pats Garfield on the back.}''
-'''LEIGH:''' You helped me, so... Let me pay you back.
+'''JULES:''' This shit is wack AF to me, but I'm with you, man.
-''{Leigh gives Garfield his wallet back. Garfield nods and takes it.}''
+''{The two look at the camera, and the episode ends.}''

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 '''GARFIELD:''' What?
-'''STEPHANIE:'': Look, they're hiring one of their own to accompany a Lavosian bounty hunter.
+'''STEPHANIE:''' Look, they're hiring one of their own to accompany a Lavosian bounty hunter.
 '''GARFIELD:''' Oh, no no no-

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 ''{Stephanie ponders for a moment.}''
-'''STEPHANIE:''' At least Garfield explained everything about the... human with a keen interest in drow culture? But, going out in drag doesn't affect drow culture at all?
+'''STEPHANIE:''' At least Garfield explained everything about the... human with a keen interest in drow culture? But, going out in that dress doesn't affect drow culture at all?
 ''{Stephanie cocks a brow.}''
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 '''BARTENDER:''' I know. Somebody else did. Said you deserved it.
-''{Leigh scans around the bar. He catches a glimpse of Garfield in drag, but doesn't register it. He looks at the glass for a moment. Suddenly, Gordon slaps him on the back unexpectedly.}''
+''{Leigh scans around the bar. He catches a glimpse of Garfield in women's clothes, but doesn't register it. He looks at the glass for a moment. Suddenly, Gordon slaps him on the back unexpectedly.}''
 '''GORDON:''' Looks like ye 'ave a guardian angel of ya own!
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 '''GARFIELD:''' Oh, no no no-
-'''STEPHANIE:''' Some people didn't take kindly to you winning all those auctions, and then someone else caught wind of your "streaks of luck" at a casino in San Crystal-balls.
+'''STEPHANIE:''' Some people didn't take kindly to you winning all those auctions, and then someone else caught wind of your "streaks of luck" at a casino in San Crystal-balls. I also theorize he's targeting you because you saw a part of his true colours and he's got a Masquerade to uphold. Thank fuck I managed to get a good lunch break.
 ''{Garfield slams his own head against a table.}''
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 '''LEIGH:''' Garfield must've heard of my plight from you and tried to help me.
-'''STEPHANIE:''' Ohhhhhhhh, did I call at a bad time?
+'''STEPHANIE:''' Ohhhhhhhh, I must've called at a bad time.
 ''{Jules arrives in the apartment. Garfield still slams his head against the table.}''
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 ''{Stephanie laughs.}''
-'''STEPHANIE:''' Oh, you guys just made my day. But, I gotta go. I just wanted to make a request to Garfield to keep himself from getting hurt. I... Will speak to you guys again.
+'''STEPHANIE:''' Oh, you guys just made my day. But, I gotta go. I just wanted to make a request to Garfield to keep himself from getting hurt. I will speak to you guys again, possibly after work.
 '''LEIGH:''' Bye.
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 ''{Garfield nods.}''
-'''LEIGH:'': Julian?
+'''LEIGH:''' Julian?
 '''JULES:''' I heard everything.
@@ Line 486: / Line 486: @@
 '''LEIGH:''' You helped me, so... Let me pay you back.
-''{Leigh gives Garfield his wallet back. Garfield nods and takes the wallet back.}''
+''{Leigh gives Garfield his wallet back. Garfield nods and takes it.}''