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Noxigar at 17:57, 8 May 2019

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Noxigar at 17:57, 8 May 2019

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Noxigar at 03:02, 7 May 2019

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Noxigar: I missed a grammar

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I missed a grammar

Noxigar at 03:40, 26 November 2018

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Noxigar at 03:37, 26 November 2018

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Noxigar at 03:25, 26 November 2018

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Noxigar at 02:28, 26 November 2018

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Noxigar at 02:27, 26 November 2018

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Noxigar: Before I start anything...

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Before I start anything...

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 *Garfield tries to help Leigh, after feeling remorse for ruining the Human-who-likes-Drow's career.
 *Leigh catches on to Garfield's interventions, despite the numerous disguises.
 ==Transcript==

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 ==Synopsis==
-The week or so after the Heist. In essence, Leigh's own 6 of Wands.
+The week or so after the Heist. In essence, Leigh's own 6 of Wands:
 ==Transcript==

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 ''{Jules pats Garfield on the back.}''
-'''JULES:''' This shit is wack AF to me, but I'm with you, man.
+'''JULES:''' This shit is wack "ayy-eff" to me, but I'm with you, man.
 '''LEIGH:''' You helped me, so... Let us pay you back.

@@ Line 83: / Line 83: @@
 ''{Leigh looks at Jacqueline for affirmation, but she just shakes her head and sighs.}''
-'''JACQUELINE:''' If we keep you, this will really bad on the company, and I cannot allow that. I'm letting you go, Leigh. I'm sorry.
+'''JACQUELINE:''' If we keep you, this will look really bad on the company, and I cannot allow that. I'm letting you go, Leigh. I'm sorry.
 ''{Leigh sighs before cracking a small smile.}''

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 ==Synopsis==
-The day after the heist.
+The week or so after the Heist. In essence, Leigh's own 6 of Wands.
 ==Transcript==

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 '''TRACY:''' I'm just surprised at how smoothly this went. Nobody-
-''{Garfield winces. Volkov's head pops out from the next room, eyes gazing at Garfield.}''
+''{Garfield winces. Volkov's head pops out from the next room, eyes gazing at Garfield in concern.}''
 '''TRACY:''' ...got hurt from this whatsoever!

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 '''HEADWIZ:''' Man, this stuff is really fuckin' good! If I knew you lived here, I would've actually visited you guys.
-'''GARFIELD:''' Technically, we live above it, but-...
+'''GARFIELD:''' Technically, we live above it, but...
-'''HEADWIZ:''' Yeah, yeah, I know. Still, though. I haven't had cabbage rolls this good since my dad used to make 'em for me when I was a kid.
+'''HEADWIZ:''' Yeah, yeah, I know. Still, though. I haven't had cabbage rolls this good since my dad used to make 'em for me, when I was a kid.
 '''CHAOS:''' Lex and I have finished counting the bills, along with the money that Headwiz managed to siphon from the bank account. Splitting it evenly, we will all be getting around $400,000 each.
-''{Garfield does a spit-take, covering Tracy in borscht.}''
+''{Virgil does a spit-take, covering Tracy in borscht.}''
 '''TRACY:''' Ugh, dude!
-'''GARFIELD:''' Cripes, sorry about that. Four-hundred grand? Are you serious?
+'''VIRGIL:''' Cripes, sorry 'bout that. Four-hundred grand? Are you serious?
-'''CHAOS:''' Yep. We managed to grab around $2.4 million from the fundraiser alone. We got that D'Arque guy good.
+'''CHAOS:''' Yep. We managed to grab around $2.4 million from the Fundraiser alone. We got that D'Arque guy good.
 '''LEX:''' Ya all gotta remember to stay low for the next few months. Don't arouse any suspicions, ya?
-''{Garfield, Tracy, and Virgil all nod.}''
+''{Garfield, Tracy, Headwiz, and Virgil all nod.}''
 '''VIRGIL:''' Got it, man. Say, what do y'all plan on doin' with your cuts?
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 '''LEX:''' That's fair. I don't know what I wanna do with my money, either. Perhaps I'll buy a bar of chocolate, or somethin'.
-'''TRACY:''' Dude... you can do that anyway. Chocolate doesn't cost-...
+'''TRACY:''' Dude... you can do that anyway. Chocolate doesn't cost-
 ''{Chaos places his hand on Tracy's wrist and leans forward.}''
@@ Line 41: / Line 41: @@
 '''CHAOS:''' Don't bother telling him this stuff, he doesn't get it. Let him have this.
-''{Tracy looks confused as Chaos backs away.}''
+''{Tracy looks confused, as Chaos backs away.}''
 '''HEADWIZ:''' I'm gonna send most of the money back to my mom. She needs it more than I do.
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 '''VIRGIL:''' Yeah, same. Well, gonna divide it between my family, the community, my lil sis' college fund...
-'''TRACY:''' I'm just surprised at how smoothly this went. Nobody got hurt from this whatsoever!
+'''TRACY:''' I'm just surprised at how smoothly this went. Nobody-
 ''{Cut to Leigh, who is being interrogated by Xavier D'Arque in Jacqueline Rosenberg's office. Standing next to Xavier is Jacqueline with her arms crossed, and standing behind Leigh is Stephanie and Dahn. Xavier slams his fists on the table.}''
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 '''XAVIER:''' THE FUCKING VILLAGE PEOPLE? DO YOU HONESTLY EXPECT ME TO BELIEVE THAT BULLSHIT?
-'''DAHN:''' Nah man, witnesses did say that they looked kinda like the village-
+'''DAHN:''' Nah man, witnesses did say that they looked kinda like the-
 '''XAVIER:''' CRAM IT, I'M TALKING HERE!
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 '''XAVIER:''' I don't give a fuck! He is... or ''was'' an employee of this company, and he fucked up.
-'''LEIGH:''' I'm- I'm sorry... I-...
+'''LEIGH:''' I'm- I'm sorry... I-
 '''XAVIER:''' You will be sorry, alright. You're fired!
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 '''LEIGH:''' You can't fire me! You don't even work here!
-'''XAVIER:''' Oh, but I do, dirt elf. I work for this entire city, and this entire fucking state! It cost a lot of money to do this and shit hit the fan. Now I'm drawing blood. Get the ''fuck'' out.
+'''XAVIER:''' Oh, but I do, dirt elf. I work for this entire city, and this entire fucking state! It cost a lot of money to do this, and shit hit the fan. Now I'm spilling blood. Get the ''fuck'' out.
 ''{Leigh looks at Jacqueline for affirmation, but she just shakes her head and sighs.}''
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 '''LEIGH:''' At least I broke my one week limit, huh?
-''{Jacqueline sighs. Leigh stands up and walks out of the office, looking defeated. Both Jacqueline and Stephanie look somewhat remorseful, while Xavier is wearing a shit-eating grin. Dahn looks concerned, but is keeping his mouth shut. Cut to the building's foyer. Leigh walks out of the main elevators, and is immediately greeted by Gordon, who is wearing a large smile on his face.}''
+''{Leigh stands up and walks out of the office, looking defeated. Both Jacqueline and Stephanie look somewhat remorseful, while Xavier is wearing a shit-eating grin. Dahn looks concerned, but is keeping his mouth shut. Cut to the building's foyer. Leigh walks out of the main elevators, and is immediately greeted by Gordon, who is wearing a large smile on his face.}''
 '''GORDON:''' EY, FUTURE EMPLOYEE OF TH' MONTH, WHAT'S...
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 '''VOLKOV:''' Of course! Coming right up!
-''{Volkov goes offscreen. Garfield loudly burps.}''
+''{Volkov goes offscreen.}''
 '''CHAOS:''' Give us a couple of days, and we'll deposit the money into your bank accounts.