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 '''JULES:''' Shh. You're still on the clock.
-''{Five seconds of silence. Suddenly, a beeping sound.}'''
+''{Five seconds of silence. Suddenly, a beeping sound.}''
 '''JULES:''' AND NOW IT'S TIIIME TO CLOCK OUT, AND TIME TO HIT THE BAR WITH YOUR BUDDY, JULES!

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 == Summary ==
-Ready, Set, Go! is a decent episode concept... let's just see if we can't make it beefier!
+Ready, Set, Go! and No Hall Like Town Hall are decent episode concepts that I think fit better together. As their current iterations cannot be sandwiched without heavy removal of filler, I have made this Draft under the impression that this premise of fusing them will likely be rejected in favour of something else.
 == Transcript ==

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 '''CHAOS:''' Huh. Can we go home now? I wanna relax.
-'''LEX:''' Ya mon, good idea. We could catch a new episode of Trial of Chairs. I wanna see who they're gonna kill next!
+'''LEX:''' Ya mon, good idea.
 '''CHAOS:''' Whoo, now that sounds like a good idea! Come on, guys!
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 '''XAVIER:''' What a great day. I have the full support of San Cristobal's government, and now I have Townindale's, my sweet, sweet hometown. We're making serious progress, Penelope.
-'''STEPHANIE:''' It's Step-... Ugh, nevermind.
+'''STEPHANIE:''' It's Step- Ugh, nevermind.
 ''{The two walk down Main Street, until they run into the same beggar that Chaos ran into earlier. The beggar, playing a similarly hypnotic dubstep song from his speakers, looks up at Xavier. His eyes twinkle and a grin appears on his face.}''

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	'''BEGGAR:''' Thanks, hombre.		'''BEGGAR:''' Thanks, hombre.

−	''{Chaos shakes the man’s hand as he walks away. When Chaos is gone, the man stands up and pulls out a bigger bowl, filled with more cash, putting the contents of the smaller bowl inside. He snickers to himself as he dusts off. He then stands up and walks away, whistling a happy tune.}''	+	''{Chaos shakes the man’s hand as he walks away. When Chaos is gone, the man stands up and pulls out a bigger bowl, filled with more cash, putting the contents of the smaller bowl inside. He snickers to himself as he dusts off. He then stands up and walks away, whistling a happy tune. Cut to Chaos, in Town Square. At the end of Town Square is Town Hall, a somewhat large building from the early 1800s, built in an Early Federal style. On the top front of the building is a gigantic clock, with a bell on top. On the roof is a flagpole, which is flying the American flag. Chaos gazes at the top of the marble staircase, his eyes burning with the embers of passion and rage. Clutching the bill in his hand, he marches onwards, bursting through the doors with a vigor like no other.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' EXCUSE ME, I HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY TO YOU PEOPLE AT TOWN HA-...
		+
		+	''{Chaos notices the receptionist, who is a young and attractive woman with blonde hair with pink streaks. He is immediately smitten by her as his face becomes flushed. His foot catches on a piece of loose carpet and he trips over. The receptionist stands up, and rushes to his side.}''
		+
		+	'''RECEPTIONIST:''' Oh dear, are you alright?
		+
		+	''{Chaos looks picks himself off and brushes himself off. He backs away from the receptionist before attempting to regain his composure.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' Haha, yeah, I'm fine, I just- Hey. I want to talk to the guy who's in charge here!
		+
		+	'''RECEPTIONIST:''' You mean the Mayor?
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' Yeah, that guy.
		+
		+	'''RECEPTIONIST:''' Do you have an appointment?
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' A- what-what?
		+
		+	'''RECEPTIONIST:''' An appointment?
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' Ohh. One of those things. Shit.
		+
		+	''{Chaos looks at the receptionist and furrows his brow, in an attempt to look sexy. He clears his throat and leans on a nearby pillar.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' I don't suppose you could give me... an exception?
		+
		+	''{The receptionist looks Chaos up and down.}''
		+
		+	'''RECEPTIONIST:''' I can make a special exception for you.
		+
		+	''{The two lock eyes as Chaos and the receptionist walk towards each other in a sensual manner. The two stare deeply at each other as Chaos leans close towards her and she reciprocates. Romantic music begins to play as Chaos puts his arms around her waist and the two are about to kiss. Suddenly the music stops, and the last few moments are revealed to be part of Chaos' imagination, as he is standing flushed after she asked him if she had an appointment.}''
		+
		+	'''RECEPTIONIST:''' So? Do you have an appointment?
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' I-I-I don't, but...
		+
		+	''{The receptionist looks on her computer. She smiles at Chaos.}''
		+
		+	'''RECEPTIONIST:''' It appears that he's free right now, actually! Would you like to see him now?
		+
		+	''{Chaos regains his composure again.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' Oh my gods, yes, please! Thank you so much!
		+
		+	'''{The receptionist motions to the nearby staircase.}''
		+
		+	'''RECEPTIONIST:''' His office is at the end of the hallway, you can't miss it. I sent him a message to alert him of your presence.
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' Thank you...
		+
		+	''{Chaos walks towards the receptionist to read her nametag.}''
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		+	'''CHAOS:''' ...Noelle.
		+
		+	''{He quickly backs away once more, before looking at his surroundings.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' ...I really like what you guys have done with the place.
		+
		+	''{Chaos awkwardly salutes Noelle who chuckles before making his way upstairs. The hallway is silent save for his stomps and the distant sound of crowds downstairs. Chaos stops at the end of the hall. Inches from his face, "MAYOR" is emblazoned on the door. Chaos inhales. Slowly, he turns the door handle. An ominous, oppressive air escapes through the crack and whips across his face like tendrils from an ancient, unseen evil. A bead of sweat drips down Chaos' neck. Cut to a high-tech laboratory. Garfield is casually analyzing DNA samples on a computer. Behind him is a scene of carnage, as scientists are engaged in battle against a horde of giant Venus Flytraps which are hellbent on devouring them.}''
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' This is why you shouldn't have let them out of the cage, Jerry!
		+
		+	''{The scientist (with a nametag reading "Jerry") responds to Garfield.}''
		+
		+	'''JERRY:''' How was ''I'' supposed to know that they had developed a taste for human flesh?
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' Have you never seen Little Shop of Horrors?
		+
		+	'''JERRY:''' They're aliens, Garfield!
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' It's the same principle!
		+
		+	''{Garfield sighs.}''
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' Hold on, I can do this. Just give me a second!
		+
		+	''{Garfield pours some colored vials of liquid into a machine while he types on the computer. After a couple of seconds, the machine makes a "ding" sound, and it pours out a glowing green liquid into a cup. Garfield transfers the green liquid into an aerosol spray and puts goggles on. He strolls over to a scene of a plant in the middle of devouring a scientist and sprays it with the formula. The plant freezes and spits the scientist out, who emerges alive and well. He sprays the formula all around the laboratory, prompting the plants to cease their attacks on the scientists and become docile. He then gently leads the plants back into their cages and goes back to his computer.}''

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 ''{Chaos looks down to see that the man he almost tripped over is young and unkempt, in a neon yellow jacket and a green tiger print beanie hat, sitting on the pavement, and clutching a bowl with a few coins in it. Next to him a small beatbox, playing a hypnotic-sounding dubstep song. He is a beggar. He awkwardly looks at the beggar for a few seconds before getting a sudden and startling feeling of good will.}''
-'''CHAOS:''' ...I am dreadfully sorry, sir. Please accept this money as an apology.
+'''CHAOS:''' ...I am dreadfully sorry, sir. Please, accept this money as an apology!
-''{Chaos pulls a random bill from his pocket and puts it into the bowl.}''
+''{Chaos pulls a $20.00 bill from his pocket and puts it into the bowl.}''
 '''BEGGAR:''' Thanks, hombre.
 ''{Chaos shakes the man’s hand as he walks away. When Chaos is gone, the man stands up and pulls out a bigger bowl, filled with more cash, putting the contents of the smaller bowl inside. He snickers to himself as he dusts off. He then stands up and walks away, whistling a happy tune.}''

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	'''XAVIER:''' Excellent!		'''XAVIER:''' Excellent!

−	''{Xavier begins laughing maniacally as the camera zooms on his face and the lighting dims, smash cut to the same shot as before as he stops laughing.	+	''{Xavier begins laughing maniacally as the camera zooms on his face and the lighting dims, smash cut to the same shot as before as he stops laughing. Cut to Chaos, making his way down the Main Street, casually walking along until he collides with somebody. He regains his composure and addresses the stranger.}''
		+
		+	'''???:''' Whoa, watch it, dude!
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' Oh, shit man, I didn’t mean to-
		+
		+	''{Chaos looks down to see that the man he almost tripped over is young and unkempt, in a neon yellow jacket and a green tiger print beanie hat, sitting on the pavement, and clutching a bowl with a few coins in it. Next to him a small beatbox, playing a hypnotic-sounding dubstep song. He is a beggar. He awkwardly looks at the beggar for a few seconds before getting a sudden and startling feeling of good will.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' ...I am dreadfully sorry, sir. Please accept this money as an apology.
		+
		+	''{Chaos pulls a random bill from his pocket and puts it into the bowl.}''
		+
		+	'''BEGGAR:''' Thanks, hombre.
		+
		+	''{Chaos shakes the man’s hand as he walks away. When Chaos is gone, the man stands up and pulls out a bigger bowl, filled with more cash, putting the contents of the smaller bowl inside. He snickers to himself as he dusts off. He then stands up and walks away, whistling a happy tune.}''

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	'''LEIGH:''' Um, go sports team?		'''LEIGH:''' Um, go sports team?

−	''{Gordon and Jules grab Leigh by one arm each, and drag him offscreen.}''	+	''{Gordon and Jules grab Leigh by one arm each, and drag him offscreen. Cut to an office far away. Stephanie and D'Arque, previously seen elsewhere, are the only people present within.}''
		+
		+	'''XAVIER:''' Anything else?
		+
		+	'''STEPHANIE:''' Jacqueline Rosenberg got back to us.
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		+	'''XAVIER:''' Go on...
		+
		+	'''STEPHANIE:''' She wants to know how the hell you got the number to the telemarketing department, her words.
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		+	'''XAVIER:''' Yes, and how did you explain it to her?
		+
		+	'''STEPHANIE:''' Pressed buttons until someone answered, of course. We've got the room - Endorsement "To Be Determined At A Later Price".
		+
		+	'''XAVIER:''' Excellent!
		+
		+	''{Xavier begins laughing maniacally as the camera zooms on his face and the lighting dims, smash cut to the same shot as before as he stops laughing.

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	'''CHAOS:''' And I’ll do it with style.		'''CHAOS:''' And I’ll do it with style.

−	''{Chaos opens the door, leaves, and then slams it behind him.}''	+	''{Chaos opens the door, leaves, and then slams it behind him. Garfield and Lex look at each other, confusedly.}''
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' Where did you find this guy?
		+
		+	'''LEX:''' Oh, we go back, mon. I gave him a lift in my camper van after he dropped out of magic school and we kinda became best friends. That, and I also helped him in his heists.
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		+	'''GARFIELD:''' Were you always a criminal?
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		+	'''LEX:''' Nah, mon. It was just his idea of a "fun time."
		+
		+	''{Garfield snickers.}''
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		+	'''GARFIELD:''' "Fun," huh? If only Chaos knew of my Bounty...
		+
		+	''{Garfield takes out a pocketwatch, and checks the time.}''
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' I should probably get going. If I take care of this little science project NoxCorp has me in for, I might be back in time for some LARPing.
		+
		+	''{Garfield opens the door, leaves, and gently closes the door behind him. Cut to Leigh, who is taking a phone call.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Okay, so if I am getting this right, you would like the Rosenberg Association to support your candidate's campaign by allowing the use of the event room for a rally, correct?
		+
		+	''{Mumbling on the other side of the phone as Leigh hums in approval.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Mmmhmm, okay, mmhmm. Okay, I just need to send a memo to the CEO... So he's announcing it today, huh?
		+
		+	''{Leigh types on the keyboard a few times and clicks the mouse. More mumbling on the end of the line.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' An endorsement? Oh my, I um, you might need to ask her directly.
		+
		+	''{Continued mumbling.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Oh, okay. I can definitely do that. What's your name, again?
		+
		+	''{Short mumbling.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Stephanie? Alright. I've got it, and it's about to be sent. Do you want me to include your contact details?
		+
		+	''{Mumble.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Oh, okay. That makes sense. Alright, it's sent. Anything else?
		+
		+	''{One final mumble.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Great! Alright, and you have a good day too.
		+
		+	''{Leigh puts the phone down. He shuts his eyes for a moment and exhales in relief}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' There is no script for when I have to TAKE a call...
		+
		+	''{He opens his eyes only to find Gordon, who has rolled his chair right next to him and was in his face the entire time. He is freaked out and screams.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' WHOA. Hey there, Gordon.
		+
		+	'''GORDON:''' How was it? That sounded like an important 'un!
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Oh, haha, yeah. Some politician wants to use this building to host a campaign rally.
		+
		+	'''GORDON:''' Ay, that sounds excitin'! First day on th'job, and ye already did somethin' cool!
		+
		+	''{Leigh laughs awkwardly as he scratches his head.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Y-yeah, haha.
		+
		+	''{Suddenly, Leigh has been flanked as Jules appears on his other side, wearing sunglasses.}''
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Oh, Jules! What are you doi-
		+
		+	'''JULES:''' Shh. You're still on the clock.
		+
		+	''{Five seconds of silence. Suddenly, a beeping sound.}'''
		+
		+	'''JULES:''' AND NOW IT'S TIIIME TO CLOCK OUT, AND TIME TO HIT THE BAR WITH YOUR BUDDY, JULES!
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' I was... actually hoping to go home and take a nap...
		+
		+	'''JULES:''' Pfft, a nap? What is this, pre-school? Legends never sleep!
		+
		+	'''GORDON:''' Ey, aren't ye' the boss's nephew?
		+
		+	'''JULES:''' Why, yes I am! Aren't you that wrestler?
		+
		+	'''GORDON:''' No?
		+
		+	'''JULES:''' ...Oh. Wanna go drinking with us?
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Hey, I didn't agree to-
		+
		+	'''GORDON:''' Oi, y'betcha! The San Cristobal Conquistadors are playing a game against the Giants!
		+
		+	'''JULES:''' Oh shit, no way? Won't this be Theros Torcan's first proper game since his comeback, too?
		+
		+	'''GORDON:''' Ye!
		+
		+	'''JULES:''' Fuck yes, we are DOING THIS.
		+
		+	'''LEIGH:''' Um, go sports team?
		+
		+	''{Gordon and Jules grab Leigh by one arm each, and drag him offscreen.}''

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	'''GORDON:''' But I gottae get back t'work. You know what t'do, eh?		'''GORDON:''' But I gottae get back t'work. You know what t'do, eh?
		+
		+	''{Cut back to Chaos, Garfield, and Lex. Chaos is reading through a letter, looking upset.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' You guys ''do'' know what to do about this, right? It says if we don't pay, they're going to shut off our power.
		+
		+	''{Lex gives a look of disbelief, in response to Chaos' words.}''
		+
		+	'''LEX:''' Says who?
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' Town Hall. Wait, we have one of those?
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' Yes. It's in the centre of the Historic District, among the tallest of buildings within. It's got a gigantic clock on it.
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' How's that not the Clock Museum?
		+
		+	'''LEX:''' You're thinking of Rivergate.
		+
		+	''{Chaos checks the amount of money in his wallet.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' Shit, I've only got $20.00. Do you think that'll be enough to cover it?
		+
		+	''{Garfield facepalms.}''
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' Y'know, I could probably pay for it with my Point Card-
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' I came to this town to ''make'' money, not ''spend'' it! We ought to fight this!
		+
		+	''{Garfield and Lex both have facial expressions indicating that they're firmly against fighting Town Hall.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' You two get your minds out of the gutter! I just wanna talk to whoever’s in charge, that’s all!
		+
		+	''{Chaos stands up from his chair and walks over to the main hallway.}''
		+
		+	'''LEX:''' What are you doing?
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' Why, my fellow, time is of the essence! I’m going to march all the way over to Town Hall right now, and give them a good old beating off!
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' Did you just say-
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' I’m going to go over there and get us justice. I’m going to take them from behind, and give them a reach around. Just watch me.
		+
		+	''{Lex coughs violently.}''
		+
		+	'''GARFIELD:''' Uh...
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' What? Was it something I said? Y'know what? Nevermind. While you two vegetate, I’ll be putting ourselves in the clear.
		+
		+	''{Chaos walks over to the coat rack and puts on a tweed jacket.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' You two just do whatever. I’ll sort this all out.
		+
		+	''{Chaos pulls a pipe from his pocket and sticks it in his mouth.}''
		+
		+	'''CHAOS:''' And I’ll do it with style.
		+
		+	''{Chaos opens the door, leaves, and then slams it behind him.}''