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Noxigar: /* The End */

2012-12-17T07:40:47Z

‎The End

Noxigar: /* Movie(again) */

2012-12-17T07:37:28Z

‎Movie(again)

Show changes

Noxigar: /* Movie(again) */ Part II-a, since I need to check in case of typoes

2012-12-17T06:41:52Z

‎Movie(again): Part II-a, since I need to check in case of typoes

Noxigar: /* Commercial */

2012-12-17T05:50:01Z

‎Commercial

Noxigar: /* Commercial */

2012-12-17T05:49:47Z

‎Commercial

Noxigar at 05:41, 17 December 2012

2012-12-17T05:41:47Z

Noxigar at 05:40, 17 December 2012

2012-12-17T05:40:43Z

Noxigar: missed a bracket

2012-12-17T05:39:40Z

missed a bracket

Noxigar: kay, checked for wiki-editing error so now I can continue. And part one of this lengthy riff is done officially.

2012-12-17T05:32:07Z

kay, checked for wiki-editing error so now I can continue. And part one of this lengthy riff is done officially.

Noxigar at 05:19, 17 December 2012

2012-12-17T05:19:02Z

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 *Animator: JCM
 *Everything else: JCM
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 '''JCM:''' ''{during the credits}'' Today is all right for tonight...Riding in a Corvette, feeling all right. Today is all right for tonight! ''{quickly}'' I'm probably going to get sued for singing this. ''{normal}'' Today is all right for tonight...Riding in a Corvette, feeling all right. All right for tonight!
 ''{Cut to the new school.}''
@@ Line 1,655: / Line 1,659: @@
 '''JCM:''' This is the greatest day of my life!
 ''{Cut to the door. Chwoka walks in.}''
@@ Line 1,673: / Line 1,680: @@
 ''{JCM screams and runs offscreen.}''

@@ Line 668: / Line 668: @@
 '''JCM:''' OK, this is stupid. We aren't in a real court. It's just a building with a bunch of chairs all over it.
 ''{Strong Sad hits his pad with a hammer, breaking it in half.}''
@@ Line 698: / Line 700: @@
 '''STRONG SAD:''' Don't you mean ''my'' time?
 '''BADSTAR:''' Whatever. Now, speak.
@@ Line 710: / Line 714: @@
 '''BADSTAR:''' Hey, what about my check?
 ''{JCM jumps out the window. Badstar turns to the director.}''
 '''BADSTAR:''' Do you have my money?
@@ Line 718: / Line 726: @@
 ''{Cut to the fanstuff school. JCM walks into the auditorium. He sees Kanjiro, Dinoshaur, and Freldman looking at the boat.}''
 '''KANJIRO:''' That's a mighty fine boat, isn't it?
@@ Line 744: / Line 754: @@
 ''{JCM leaves the room and finds Ryan Bluefox looking out the window.}''
 '''JCM:''' Hey, who are you?
@@ Line 790: / Line 802: @@
 '''JCM:''' Yeah, ''I'm OK'', but everyone else at my school is either acting strange or disappeared. I think the newbie, Ryan, has something to do with it.
 '''JCM'S FATHER:''' Yes! A reason to get you out of that school!
@@ Line 796: / Line 810: @@
 '''JCM'S MOTHER:''' We're going to transfer you to a new, safer school.
 '''JCM:''' Dang it, mom!
@@ Line 802: / Line 818: @@
 '''LIGHTNING GUY:''' Blah blah blah blah-
 '''MAN WITH LOW VOICE:''' ''{offscreen}'' Be quiet! I heard that a little boy needs answers.
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 '''LIGHTNING GUY:''' ''{proud}'' I know. Now, what is wrong?
 '''JCM:''' Everyone at my school disappeared somehow, three guys are being weird, and we have a new student that seems to have done something bad.
@@ Line 826: / Line 846: @@
 '''LIGHTNING GUY:''' Help you, but I like insulting you more.
 '''JCM:''' Anyway, my mom wants to send me to another school, but I can't handle that.
@@ Line 838: / Line 860: @@
 '''JCM:''' I was right! Ryan Bluefox killed Lucas Aura!
 '''DIRECTOR:''' Really?
@@ Line 880: / Line 907: @@
 '''JCM:''' How is that great news?
 '''IT'S DOT COM:''' I just finished the conflict at the other school and I need my rest! So, I'm postponing so there will be less work for me!
@@ Line 888: / Line 917: @@
 '''NACHOMAN:''' That's not cool, yo.
 '''JCM:''' What did you just say?
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 ''{Pan to the outside to show TheDenzel jumping into a car with hot girls in swimsuits and an old driver in it.}''
 '''THEDENZEL:''' ''{put on his sunglasses and waves his hand}'' Let's go, Mendel.
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 '''JCM:''' Don't ask.
 ''{JCM walks past Vince Gagoman.}''
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 '''JCM:''' Hi, Sephiroth, I mean, Sephiroth, I mean, Sephiroth.
 ''{JCM walks off and Sephiroth shakes his fist.}''
@@ Line 982: / Line 1,022: @@
 '''NOXIGAR:''' Hi, HRFjcm, I mean, WUjcm, I mean JCM.
 '''JCM:''' Deja vu?

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 '''HOMSAR:''' daaaAAAAAaaaaAAAAAaaaAAAAAA, watch your footin when you step into the nectar chamber.<br>
 '''HOMESTAR:''' Well said, weiwdo.<br>
-'''NAMINE:''' I was supposed to do the riffing alone.<br.
+'''NAMINE:''' I was supposed to do the riffing alone.<br>
 '''HOMESTAR:''' Noxigaw said you'd need help on this episode.<br>
 '''NAMINE:''' Again I wonder: why does Noxigar like JCMovies so much?</blockquote>

@@ Line 633: / Line 633: @@
 '''JOEYDAY:''' Hello, everybody! Are you bored out of your mind?
 '''RANDOM PEOPLE:''' Yeah!
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 '''RANDOM PEOPLE:''' That rocks!
 ''{Rocks hit the random people from offscreen and the Thnikkaman walks to them.}''
 '''THE THNIKKAMAN:''' Yeah. Shut up, kids!
 '''JOEYDAY:''' All made with FellowSchools! <small>You can make your own for a small fee of ten dollars a month.</small>

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 '''JCM:''' Oh, dear. This is not going to end well.
-<blockquote>'''NAMINE:''' Pro-tip: Don't judge something, not even a contrived circumstance, based on its potential. Even if it potentially awful, the finished product should be judged for how it performs at the given time.<br>
+<blockquote>'''NAMINE:''' Pro-tip: Don't judge something, not even a contrived circumstance, based on its potential. Even if it's potentially awful, the finished product should be judged for how it performs at the given time.<br>
 '''NAMINE:''' I think Noxigar learned this among many things from someone, but I can't put my finger on it.</blockquote>

@@ Line 542: / Line 542: @@
 '''THATKIDSAM:''' OK, why did AlmsforthePudgy write his test in Russian?
-<blockquote>'''NAMINE:''' ...to be challenging? Don't see any other reason why, honestly.</blockqutoe>
+<blockquote>'''NAMINE:''' ...to be challenging? Don't see any other reason why, honestly.</blockquote>
 I have to stop giving the students English-to-whatever dictionaries.

@@ Line 435: / Line 435: @@
 <blockquote>'''NAMINE:''' I can't wait to see the portrayal of it!<br>
-'''HOMSAR:''' It was the best of times, and the first of times!
+'''HOMSAR:''' It was the best of times, and the first of times!<br>
 '''NAMINE:''' ...what.
 </blockquote>

@@ Line 413: / Line 413: @@
 '''JCM:''' Mine, too, but it still wouldn't be the same. Also, I heard they will get rid of students having their own email shows.
 '''LUCAS AURA:''' Don't worry. They're building a school student school for those. When it's built, I'm moving there, since Aruseus doesn't "have enough Homestar" in his show.
 '''JCM:''' And Funstar doesn't have enough anything in his. Oh well, all my other fanstuff is surviving.
 '''DIRECTOR:''' All four.
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 ''{Cut to the school student school.}''
 '''SUPER SAM:''' Well, me and my pet finally did it.
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 '''SUPER SAM:''' Eh, it'll grow. It may soon be bigger than the fanstuff school. Actually when it purges, it will be.
 '''JCM:''' Yeah, if we can make over 100 fanstuff by then.
@@ Line 442: / Line 453: @@
 '''JCM:''' Just saying. You shouldn't get you hopes up. If you do that, then if it doesn't happen, you will be heartbroken.
-'''SUPER SAM:''' Nah, I don't need a heart. I have my pet.
+'''SUPER SAM:''' Nah, I don't need a heart.
 ''{JCM pets the clamburger and it bites him.}''
@@ Line 463: / Line 478: @@
 ''{Cut to the fanstuff school's auditorium. It's dot com is on the stage.}''
 '''IT'S DOT COM:''' OK, you guys spent the last month putting and taking fanstuff in the boat. Which is good. Unfortunately, we still have a month until the purge and no one should make fanstuff until it happens, so...you have to try and work that out.
@@ Line 469: / Line 486: @@
 '''IT'S DOT COM:''' Well, there's problems at the Homestar Runner School, so, I'm going to have to postpone the purge until I fix it. Bye!
 ''{It's dot com walks out of the auditorium.}''
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 '''KICKCHEAT:''' Hooray! A death of a meme!
 ''{The class cheers.}''
@@ Line 507: / Line 529: @@
 '''SHWOO:''' OK, who painted "my nam's Shwoo, i liek to pawty" on my door?!
 '''CHAOS:''' ''{snickers}'' Innocent until proven guilty.
 '''SHWOO:''' Dang it, Chaos!
 ''{Cut to Thatkidsam in an office. He is checking papers when he stops.}''
-'''THATKIDSAM:''' OK, why did AlmsforthePudgy write his test in Russian? I have to stop giving the students English-to-whatever dictionaries.
+'''THATKIDSAM:''' OK, why did AlmsforthePudgy write his test in Russian?
 ''{Cut to TheDenzel drawing well faces on every picture he can find. JCM catches him in the middle of an act.}''
@@ Line 531: / Line 561: @@
 '''JCM:''' But, IDC, you have to care! I miss my normal, polite school.
 ''{It's dot com starts snoring.}''
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 '''LI'L BRUDDER:''' Hey, that's my line!
 ''{JCM does a facepalm.}''
@@ Line 565: / Line 599: @@
 '''STRONG SAD:''' In today's case, we have Bluebry Muffin suing JCM for eating his brother.
 ''{JCM walks onscreen.}''
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 '''JCM:''' Oh, dear. This is not going to end well.
 ''{Cut to a screen that says "We'll be back to Judge Moody after these messages!".}''

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 '''NAMINE:''' Nice comeback, there, Ben Stiller.<br>
 '''NOXIGAR:''' Thanks!<br>
-''{Namine facepalms}''</bloackquote>
+''{Namine facepalms}''</blockquote>
 '''DIRECTOR:''' JCM! Cut!