Of Mechs and Men/1 - Revision history

Brerose: to be continued

2013-09-20T07:32:39Z

to be continued

Brerose at 05:11, 17 September 2013

2013-09-17T05:11:07Z

Brerose: moved Ready To Rock/1 to Of Mechs and Men/1: a better title, I actually like it

2013-09-17T05:06:36Z

moved Ready To Rock/1 to Of Mechs and Men/1: a better title, I actually like it

Brerose: i still want you ideas :(

2013-09-12T01:41:05Z

i still want you ideas :(

Brerose: HERE

2013-08-28T23:47:42Z

HERE

Brerose: found a better reference name

2013-08-28T23:45:51Z

found a better reference name

Brerose: i'll get on this promises give me five mins

2013-08-28T23:43:02Z

i'll get on this promises give me five mins

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'''SUMMARY:''' We are introduced to Rock, our protagonist and a 'special' officer in the DPD of Dentech City.

== Transcript ==

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	This was five months ago. The date is June 17th, 20XX.		This was five months ago. The date is June 17th, 20XX.

−	This is...'''~~INSERT PERMANENT TITLE HERE~~'''.	+	This is...'''OF MECHS AND MEN'''.
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−	~~''{to be continued}''~~

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 "Dispatch, dispatch! It's an RM! I repeat, it's an RM! Call backu-"
-Before she can finish her sentence, a blade flies forward, decapitating her. The remaining criminal gets out of his car, revealing crescent blades attached to his wrists, and several circuits attached to them leading up to his shoulders. Cut pulls out a small battery, plugs it into his finger tips, and then absorbs the electricity. He then walks away from the crash scene, escaping.
+Before she can finish her sentence, a blade flies forward, decapitating her. The remaining criminal gets out of his car, revealing crescent blades attached to his wrists, and several circuits attached to them leading up to his shoulders. Cutman pulls out a small battery, plugs it into his finger tips, and then absorbs the electricity. He then walks away from the crash scene, escaping.
 This was five months ago. The date is June 17th, 20XX.

← Older revision		Revision as of 01:41, 12 September 2013
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−	~~'''SUMMARY:''' We~~ are ~~introduced to Rock Light~~, ~~our protagonist and an officer~~ in the ~~Abel City PD~~.	+	January 13th, 20XX. Abel City, Japan. Two humanoids in gas masks are escaping from a crash scene, carrying bags of cash, as a wrecked armored van lies in the background. The criminals jack a car off a woman, and begin to drive away. An ACPD squad car soons pursues.

−	~~== Transcript ==~~	+	There are two people in the squad car, a young woman, with long red hair to her shoulders, and an older man, with short, black hair, cropped evenly, who is driving. Both are wearing ACPD uniforms, as they chase after. The woman speaks first. Her name is Yui Nakano. She turns over to her partner as she speaks.
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		+	"How many of them are there?"
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		+	The male speaks next. His name is Tarou Mori.
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		+	"Two. They're wearing gas masks. No clue if they're humans or RMs."
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		+	"Right, let's ju-"
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		+	Before Yui can speak, shots are fired from in front of them. Yui pulls out her piece from her boot, returning fire. One of her shots smashes through the back glass, killing the driver. Red blood flies onto the windshield, as the car goes out of control, smashing off a rail of the freeway they are on into a tree. They begin to drive closer, when large crescent shaped blades begin flying at them. One of them flies forward, decapitating Tarou. Yui begins panicking, and grabs the radio.
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		+	"Dispatch, dispatch! It's an RM! I repeat, it's an RM! Call backu-"
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		+	Before she can finish her sentence, a blade flies forward, decapitating her. The remaining criminal gets out of his car, revealing crescent blades attached to his wrists, and several circuits attached to them leading up to his shoulders. Cut pulls out a small battery, plugs it into his finger tips, and then absorbs the electricity. He then walks away from the crash scene, escaping.
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		+	This was five months ago. The date is June 17th, 20XX.
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		+	This is...'''INSERT PERMANENT TITLE HERE'''.
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		+	''{to be continued}''

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−	'''SUMMARY:''' We are introduced to Rock, our protagonist and an officer in the Abel City PD.	+	'''SUMMARY:''' We are introduced to Rock Light, our protagonist and an officer in the Abel City PD.

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−	'''SUMMARY:''' We are introduced to Rock, our protagonist and ~~a 'special'~~ officer in the ~~DPD of Dentech~~ City.	+	'''SUMMARY:''' We are introduced to Rock, our protagonist and an officer in the Abel City PD.

	== Transcript ==		== Transcript ==

← Older revision	Revision as of 05:06, 17 September 2013
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