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2015-07-02T02:18:09Z

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Tyrannosaurus Lex: moved Cosmic Irrationality/eps/1 to Cosmic Irrationality/eps/PILOT: charles lindbergh

2014-01-15T00:30:09Z

moved Cosmic Irrationality/eps/1 to Cosmic Irrationality/eps/PILOT: charles lindbergh

Tyrannosaurus Lex: /* Transcript */ I just wanted to complete this finally. I'll go through this another time and fix all the mistakes + crappy writing.

2012-07-15T00:10:29Z

‎Transcript: I just wanted to complete this finally. I'll go through this another time and fix all the mistakes + crappy writing.

Tyrannosaurus Lex: /* Transcript */ isjasdjskpadpsadk i cannot write a proper ending dsjkldkls my dialogue is terrible ikjklmasldas

2012-07-14T23:28:57Z

‎Transcript: isjasdjskpadpsadk i cannot write a proper ending dsjkldkls my dialogue is terrible ikjklmasldas

Lucian Summers at 05:36, 23 May 2012

2012-05-23T05:36:26Z

Tyrannosaurus Lex: /* Transcript */

2012-05-22T18:16:14Z

‎Transcript

Lucian Summers at 01:04, 21 May 2012

2012-05-21T01:04:23Z

Tyrannosaurus Lex: WE GOTTA FINISH DIS SHIT SOON >:

2012-05-20T23:33:30Z

WE GOTTA FINISH DIS SHIT SOON >:

Tyrannosaurus Lex: /* Transcript */ sorry chaos :c

2012-05-19T11:30:00Z

‎Transcript: sorry chaos :c

Kirbychu: /* Transcript */

2012-05-19T02:43:48Z

‎Transcript

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	''{Bombasa closes the doors to his stall, leaving Torino alone with the gang.}''		''{Bombasa closes the doors to his stall, leaving Torino alone with the gang.}''

−	'''TORINO:''' ~~Look~~ what you'~~ve just done~~! Do you ~~know how important~~ this is?	+	'''TORINO:''' ...Fuck. ''{He turns around to the gang.}'' What the fuck is your problem?!
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		+	'''SETH:''' You have something we want, Mr. Torino. Hand it over. Now.
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		+	'''TORINO:''' Oh my god. Did they seriously put a bounty on my head?
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		+	'''SETH:''' Yes, and we're-...
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		+	'''TORINO:''' And you're the bounty hunters? Christ. You look like a circus brigade.
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		+	'''SETH:''' Just give it to us before it gets messy.
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		+	''{Seth quickly pulls his gun out and aims it at Torino. Torino does the same thing, leading to a standoff.}''
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		+	'''TORINO:''' You wanna fight dirty, eh? Oh, I can fight dirty. I can fight reaaaal dirty.
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		+	''{STANDOFF MUSIC}''
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		+	''{TENSION}''
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		+	''{MORE TENSION}''
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		+	''{MORE TENSION}''
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		+	''{PAN AROUND THE TWO IN A 360 DEGREE ANGLE, SHOWING THE CROWD OF SPECTATORS AROUND THEM.}''
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		+	''{SETH WIPES THE SWEAT OFF HIS BROW}''
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		+	''{MUSIC GOES SILENT}''
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		+	''{Torino prepares to pull the trigger, only for B-621 to jump in and push him over. The tension breaks completely as Torino fires mid-fall, only to end up shooting himself in the foot. He writhes in pain as Seth picks the suitcase up, while holding a gun to his head.}''
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		+	'''SETH:''' Jackpot.
		+
		+	''{A squad of police run in, manoeuvring themselves through the crowd and over to Torino. They pick him up and cuff him, placing him under arrest.}''
		+
		+	'''B-621:''' Aha! It looks like he shot himself in the foot with that one, right guys?
		+
		+	''{Louis LaChance runs in and grabs the suitcase.}''
		+
		+	'''LOUIS LACHANCE:''' I followed the police over here. I thought that the gunshot meant only one thing. That you caught him and got my prize back! Or that he killed you in a horrific manner. But luckily, it was the former! Yay!
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		+	'''SETH:''' So.. how about that bounty, eh?
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		+	'''LOUIS LACHANCE:''' Oh, Of course. The bounty. 10,000 Shoumeis!
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		+	'''SETH:''' Wait, don't you mean 30,000?
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		+	'''LOUIS LACHANCE:''' That's what I originally said, but considering the damage that your little friend did to my slot machines, I'll have to use that money for repairs! But nonetheless, thank you for returning this precious thing to me. I'll take extra care to keep it safe! Doohoo!
		+
		+	''{LaChance runs off, leaving the others looking distraught and angry at B-621.}''
		+
		+	'''KRAUSS:''' Well, what did I tell you? We fucked up. ''Again.''
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		+	'''K-BOT:''' ...All that for only a third of the bounty? What a ripoff!
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		+	'''SETH:''' And it's all because of him.
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		+	'''B-621:''' B..but.. I helped defeat him, guys! Surely that makes it okay, right?
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		+	'''KRAUSS:''' We lost 20 grand because of you. No. It does not make it okay. Say, does anybody wanna play a game of dodgeball? With a particular robot's head, perhaps?
		+
		+	'''SETH:''' Oh, yes. That sounds pretty fun, actually. Especially in this circumstance.
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		+	''{B-621 runs, making the rest of the gang give chase.}''
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		+	''{Cut to: Phobos Prison Satellite, one month later. Torino is sitting alone in a dark jail cell at night time. Suddenly, a figure walks up to the bars, dressed in what seems to be a warden's outfit. The shadow is obscuring most of his features, but from what can be seen, it seems to be a tall middle-aged man with a beard.}''
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		+	'''TORINO:''' Oh, come to laugh at me too, huh? Mr. Misfire, they call me now.
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		+	'''???:''' ...
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		+	'''TORINO:''' Hmph. What? Are you gonna say anything, or are you just gonna stare at me like some fuckin' weirdo? Get the fuck out of here.
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		+	''{Pan to behind the warden. He steps out of the shadows, allowing Torino to see his face. As soon as this happens, Torino's demeanour turns completely, from one of anger into one of morbid fear.}''
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		+	'''TORINO:''' Oh no.. Please. No.. I made a mistake, I'm sorry!
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		+	'''???:''' Oh, Torino. You should have known beforehand. That is no excuse.
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		+	'''TORINO:''' PLEASE! I CAN MAKE IT UP TO YOU, I CAN FIX THIS, JUST GIVE ME TIME!
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		+	'''???:''' You've had enough time. Besides, you've disappointed me before. How can I ever trust you again? Goodbye, Torino.
		+
		+	''{Close up of Torino's face as he tries to back away, all while begging for his life.}''
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		+	'''TORINO:''' NO, NO.. YOU CAN'T DO THIS, YOU CAN'T-..
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		+	''{There is a fade to black and the sound of a gun firing, followed by the sound of a body dropping to the floor.}''
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		+	'''End of Episode'''

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 '''SETH:''' Yeah, I'll have one too.
-''{The Bartender fills another glass and hands it to Seth, but Virgil snatches it away for himself.}''
+''{The Bartender fills another glass and hands it to Seth, but Krauss snatches it away for himself.}''
-'''VIRGIL:''' Yeah, sorry about that, but ''somebody'' has to be the sober one around here, and it ain't gonna be me!
+'''KRAUSS:''' Yeah, sorry about that, but ''somebody'' has to be the sober one around here, and it ain't gonna be me!
 ''{Seth opens his mouth to say something, but no words come out. He sighs and goes into a strop.}''
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 '''PTER:''' ''{drunkenly}'' I like this drink...ANOTHER! ''{falls down}''
-''{The bartender hands Pter another drink, only for Virgil to snatch that as well.}''
+''{The bartender hands Pter another drink, only for Krauss to snatch that as well.}''
 '''SETH:''' Yeah, thanks for your help. Guys, let's just get to the market as quick as possible and nail this creep already.
 '''PTER:''' ''{slurred singing}'' Whatchagonnado, whatcha gonna do when they come for you, GHOSTBUSTERS!

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	'''SETH:''' Yeah, thanks for your help. Guys, let's just get to the market as quick as possible and nail this creep already.		'''SETH:''' Yeah, thanks for your help. Guys, let's just get to the market as quick as possible and nail this creep already.
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		+	'''PTER:''' ''{slurred singing}'' Whatchagonnado, whatcha gonna do when they come for you, GHOSTBUSTERS!

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	'''PTER:''' ''{drunkenly}'' I like this drink...ANOTHER! ''{falls down}''		'''PTER:''' ''{drunkenly}'' I like this drink...ANOTHER! ''{falls down}''
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		+	''{The bartender hands Pter another drink, only for Virgil to snatch that as well.}''
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		+	'''SETH:''' Yeah, thanks for your help. Guys, let's just get to the market as quick as possible and nail this creep already.

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 '''SETH:''' Pter, don't you think you've had a bit too much?
 '''BARTENDER:''' Nonsense! There's no such thing as too much when it comes to my bar!
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 '''BARTENDER:''' Don't worry! There'll be plenty of beer for you once you've finished solving that-... thingy you're doing!

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 ''{Open to the interior of a bathroom toilet stall. A man is crouched down, standing on the toilet seat, holding onto a large briefcase and panicking.}''
-'''BENNY TORINO:''' I can’t believe it… I cannot believe it. I just did it. I just stole from one of the biggest casinos on Mars. What the hell was I thinking?! I am going to die for sure!
+'''BENNY TORINO:''' I cannot believe it. I just did it. I just stole from one of the biggest casinos on Mars. What the hell was I thinking?! I am going to die for sure!
 ''{The sound of the bathroom door is heard opening, and three men charge into the room. Cut to the exterior of the stall, revealing the three men to be standing side to side, each of them pointing their guns at the bathroom stall.}''

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	'''K-BOT:''' ''{now speaking with a slightly deeper, cracklier, and all around more robotic voice}'' Well then! That was something! What's this about long ago? Well if he's around the market then it's time to get to the market! Make the long ago into the now! Allons-y! ''{walks, with a swift pace, directly into a wall}'' Ow! Ok, this alcohol stuff clearly doesn't get along with me...		'''K-BOT:''' ''{now speaking with a slightly deeper, cracklier, and all around more robotic voice}'' Well then! That was something! What's this about long ago? Well if he's around the market then it's time to get to the market! Make the long ago into the now! Allons-y! ''{walks, with a swift pace, directly into a wall}'' Ow! Ok, this alcohol stuff clearly doesn't get along with me...
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		+	''{Seth looks at K-Bot, and then at Pter. He edges towards the Bartender.}''
		+
		+	'''SETH:''' Yeah, I'll have one too.
		+
		+	''{The Bartender fills another glass and hands it to Seth, but Virgil snatches it away for himself.}''
		+
		+	'''VIRGIL:''' Yeah, sorry about that, but ''somebody'' has to be the sober one around here, and it ain't gonna be me!
		+
		+	''{Seth opens his mouth to say something, but no words come out. He sighs and goes into a strop.}''
		+
		+	'''SETH:''' I hate you all...
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		+	'''BARTENDER:''' Don't worry! There'll be plenty of beer for you once you've finished solving that-... thingy you're doing!

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	'''BARTENDER:''' Nonsense! There's no such thing as too much when it comes to my bar!		'''BARTENDER:''' Nonsense! There's no such thing as too much when it comes to my bar!
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		+	''{K-Bot suddenly jumps up from the floor, still emitting some smoke from his mouth.}''
		+
		+	'''K-BOT:''' ''{now speaking with a slightly deeper, cracklier, and all around more robotic voice}'' Well then! That was something! What's this about long ago? Well if he's around the market then it's time to get to the market! Make the long ago into the now! Allons-y! ''{walks, with a swift pace, directly into a wall}'' Ow! Ok, this alcohol stuff clearly doesn't get along with me...