Jose's Mexican Space Adventure/s1e02 - Revision history

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Created page with '== Summary == The Ring goes on vacation to the Curaçao island in Space Netherlands, but end up getting more than they bargained for. Back in Space Mexico, the Substitute Ring g...'

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== Summary ==

The Ring goes on vacation to the Curaçao island in Space Netherlands, but end up getting more than they bargained for. Back in Space Mexico, the Substitute Ring gets in trouble with Space Canada. Tune in to see the thrilling episode!

== Transcript ==

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 ''{Jose pulls open some blinds, revealing a porthole looking over the vast emptiness of space.}''
-'''JOSE:''' (v/o) Civil War. The notable terrorist group, El Cuerno de Carnero wanted control of the government. They wanted 1 billion frayed Spacebux injected to their Mexicredit account. And they'd do anything for it.
+'''JOSE:''' (v/o) Civil War. The notable terrorist group, El Cuerno de Carnero. They wanted control of the government. They wanted 1 billion frayed Spacebux injected to their Mexicredit account. And they'd do anything for it.
 ''{Pans to newspaper clipping on wall. "SPACE MEXICAN GOVERNMENT RECIEVES TERRORIST THREATS"}''

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 '''JOSE:''' (v/o) Much has changed in the past two years.
-''{Jose pulls open a curtain, revealing a porthole looking over the vast emptiness of space.}''
+''{Jose pulls open some blinds, revealing a porthole looking over the vast emptiness of space.}''
-'''JOSE:''' (v/o) Civil War. El Pueblo de Cuerno de Carnero wanted their 15 minutes of fame. They wanted 1 billion frayed Spacebux injected to their Mexicredit account. And they'd do anything for it.
+'''JOSE:''' (v/o) Civil War. The notable terrorist group, El Cuerno de Carnero wanted control of the government. They wanted 1 billion frayed Spacebux injected to their Mexicredit account. And they'd do anything for it.
 ''{Pans to newspaper clipping on wall. "SPACE MEXICAN GOVERNMENT RECIEVES TERRORIST THREATS"}''
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 ''{Clippings flash in order of murder. "MATHEMATICIAN NOXIGAR GUADALUPE FOUND COMATOSE IN SPACEMEX ALLEY", "TRUST FUND KOOK LEXON DARKHEART FOUND DEAD, SUSPECTED SUICIDE BECAUSE HE'S CRAZY", "PLUMBING CEO CD-I MARIO DEAD"}''
-'''JOSE:''' (v/o) At the end, it was me, AVGN, D'arque, and Honeydew. They saved the worst for us. Honeydew got thrown in the middle of an asteroid belt. D'arque was dropped from a helicopter into a volcano. AVGN... my SON... kidnapped unless I paid the billion. Presumably, they killed him. I wouldn't know, because they put me here.
+'''JOSE:''' (v/o) At the end, it was me, AVGN, D'arque, and Honeydew. They saved the worst for us. Honeydew got thrown in the middle of an asteroid belt. D'arque was dropped from a helicopter into a volcano. AVGN... my SON... kidnapped unless I paid the billion. Presumably, they killed him. I wouldn't know, because they locked me up in my office and shot it into space.
 ''{Jose opens a drawer and pulls out a handgun.}''
-'''JOSE:''' I hope he outlives me.
+'''JOSE:''' I just hope that he outlives me.
 ''{Cut to a view outside, uprooted office room floating through space. A gunshot is heard. Fade to black.}''

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 == Summary ==
-The Ring goes on vacation to the Curaçao island in Space Netherlands, but end up getting more than they bargained for. Back in Space Mexico, the Substitute Ring gets in trouble with Space Canada. Tune in to see the thrilling episode!
+== Transcript ==
-== Transcript ==
+'''JOSE:''' (v/o) At the end, it was me, AVGN, D'arque, and Honeydew. They saved the worst for us. Honeydew got thrown in the middle of an asteroid belt. D'arque was dropped from a helicopter into a volcano. AVGN... my SON... kidnapped unless I paid the billion. Presumably, they killed him. I wouldn't know, because they put me here.