Brerose: revealing raiku's gift :3 if anyone has any questions on how he did this, I can give my perspective :3 Also I don't care for names of minor characters, I'll continue later

2012-10-17T20:04:35Z

revealing raiku's gift :3 if anyone has any questions on how he did this, I can give my perspective :3 Also I don't care for names of minor characters, I'll continue later

Brerose: :3

2012-10-17T04:08:41Z

Brerose: screw it I'll start it now it's a bit weak so what i'll probably touch up later

2012-10-17T04:00:06Z

screw it I'll start it now it's a bit weak so what i'll probably touch up later

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Los Angeles, California

12:23 AM

A murder has taken place in an alley behind a small diner. A young woman was shot 3 times in the chest. Her purse is gone, and her clothes torn a bit. She was in a small black zipper-dress, which begun at her knees. The police are a bit puzzled with the case. A silver GT-500 pulls up to the crime scene. A man in a grey long coat steps out of the car, and heads towards the crime scene. An officer stops him.

'''OFFICER:''' Sir, you can't be here.

'''???:''' I don't think you know who I am.

'''OFFICER:''' Try me.

'''???''' My name...is Raiku Samiyaza.

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	'''RAIKU:''' Close enough.		'''RAIKU:''' Close enough.

−	Raiku proceeds to walk over to the chief, who is talking to two officers.	+	Raiku proceeds to walk over to the chief, who is talking to two officers. The chief notices him, and sends the officers away.
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		+	'''CHIEF:''' Ah, Mr. Sammadamayamaza.
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' Why does no one ever get that right?
		+
		+	The chief laughs.
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		+	'''CHIEF:''' So...what do you think about the case?
		+
		+	Raiku proceeds to get close to the body and examine.
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' Well....from my examinations...
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		+	'''CHIEF:''' Yes?
		+
		+	'''RAIKU:''' She's dead.
		+
		+	The chief begins to get a bit angry.
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		+	'''CHIEF:''' Look, we accepted you as a consultant, so you better help us somehow, or I'll arrest you for wasting our time.
		+
		+	Raiku smiles.
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' Trust me, I was just making a joke. I can do this...
		+
		+	Raiku grabs a pair of gloves from his bag, and puts them on. He goes up to the body to examine it.
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' Hmm... Three shots.
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		+	'''CHIEF:''' Yes, we know that. Is that all?
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' Nope. From what I can tell....she knew the killer.
		+
		+	The chief raises his eyebrow.
		+
		+	'''RAIKU:''' If you look closely at the ground, you can see where they were standing.
		+
		+	The chief looks around.
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		+	'''CHIEF:''' I don't see anything.
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' You're not looking close enough. Anyways, from the indentations, they were standing here a while. Then, the victim begun to turn, perhaps to leave, but the killer shot her first.
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		+	'''CHIEF:''' Look, wild accusations won't be any help t-
		+
		+	The chief notices Raiku isn't listening, as Raiku begins to walk away.
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		+	'''CHIEF:''' What the hell are you doing?
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' Tracking the killer's movements.
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		+	Raiku continues walking, until he enters the diner.
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' From what I can tell, by boot imprints, the killer entered the diner...and hasn't left.
		+
		+	Raiku begins walking, until he enters the employee's room, where there is a small cot.
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' And here is the killer.
		+
		+	Raiku points towards the owner of the diner, who is sitting on the cot.
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		+	'''OWNER:''' What the hell are you talking about?
		+
		+	'''CHIEF:''' My apologies sir, my consultant apparently believes you are the killer.
		+
		+	The chief looks towards Raiku.
		+
		+	'''CHIEF:''' Look, I told you to be helpful, not make accusations. It appears you're being no he-
		+
		+	The chief notices that Raiku has turned towards a book, War and Peace.
		+
		+	'''CHIEF:''' What the hell are you doing now?
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		+	'''RAIKU:''' Finding the murder weapon.
		+
		+	Raiku opens the book. Sure enough, the gun falls out of a hollow part of it.
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		+	'''CHIEF:''' The hell...is that?
		+
		+	'''RAIKU:''' Revolver. Three rounds are missing...
		+
		+	At this point, the owner pushes past the chief, and begins running for the entrance. However, he is stopped by the two officers from earlier.
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		+	'''OFFICER:''' Sir, you are under arrest for the murder of that woman.
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		+	The officer proceeds to read him his Miranda rights, and they take him away. The chief thanks Raiku, and Raiku proceeds to leave in his car.

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 '''OFFICER:''' Sir, you can't be here.
 '''???:''' I don't think you know who I am.
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 '''???''' My name...is Raiku Samiyaza.

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Brerose: revealing raiku's gift :3 if anyone has any questions on how he did this, I can give my perspective :3 Also I don't care for names of minor characters, I'll continue later

Brerose: :3

Brerose: screw it I'll start it now it's a bit weak so what i'll probably touch up later